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07-13-05, 12:56 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Thick Vs Fat (lady Fuscia Speaks)
IP: CF74 5D3A
THICK VS FAT (LADY FUSCIA SPEAKS)
We survive ladies and drive Mercedes some of us have five babies our task specific is to get cash terrific we grab Money like banks, sleazy riding and easy gliding on dubs Hugged up with a thug savage pockets above average loves Cabbage for lunchtime and that’s the punch line for eating grubs I’ve been in tight love wearing light gloves sexual urge Extreme with serge seams on FUBU jeans they can’t curve Their appetite coo-chee too much licking like Church’s chicken The night view seem high like light blue cream sky boys kicking Sprung tongue between thighs make a girl dream lies so good and sickening Anyway I say I’m chocolate but today topic stands like a stick or dick For a chick, they love Beyounce or JLO when a man call a chick thick Which one he prefer her be? Girl catapulted to stardom just by show of quick Hip action men trip in satisfaction now destine child got a recipe Wild as VIP on BET awards one lap dance and the boys rap romance those impress me Men pride is strange over a wide range of cuties with booties JLO has a HALO but that’ll make P diddy flee from the city as his duties Changed can’t make a band and stake that cake man dang PUFF Went crazy on her stuff, fun was his desire which led to gunfire big fuss Hell Shyne lost his mind and pulled a nine and fired shots in the air It was a hot affair for the love pair, a round PUERTO RICIAN butt and long hair Be freaking a slut bodies be hot like flares, let me begin correct about Ben Affleck dang he changed into a DAREDEVIL and leaped buildings onroute To find JLO all of a sudden her dress unbuttoned and bulls eye they got married (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199509) MY LINK Last edited by MADDRAPPER : 07-13-05 at 03:30 PM. Reason: LINK |
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07-13-05, 01:32 PM | #2 | ||||
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I relly enjoyed readin thismayne....good creativity, structure was koo and the concept was good too. You stayed with it...good piece...7/ 10
return tha fava in sig
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07-13-05, 03:47 PM | #3 | ||||||
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TilT I Couldn't Find Your Post But Anyway Thanks For The Props For Real Yo
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07-13-05, 04:09 PM | #4 | ||||
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links in sig bro
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:.:Relaunched Originals:.: Eazy Duz It Bitch...or get Popped |
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07-13-05, 09:24 PM | #5 | ||||||
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Upping For Responses For Real Come On
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07-14-05, 04:18 PM | #6 | ||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 2680 6423
decent drop but soon imma ask for u to see my recent drop
peep this yea, left feed back yea, gotta go gotta go peace holler ummm yea... |
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07-14-05, 04:22 PM | #7 | |||||
GeNeRaL
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Nice concept it flowed well and had good vocab and the creativity showed in this piece props man.
8.5/10 keep doing you R/F please it will be appreciated http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=199762 |
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07-14-05, 09:06 PM | #8 | ||||||
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all right thanks for the props for real yall
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07-16-05, 04:48 PM | #9 | ||||||
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need more feedback
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