check it

ur flow anit "lyrical" its doodoo
da flow u have is wen u tie ya shoe
and dat gotta die sig is gonna reverse
and dat somebody is U

bronx beat give what ever kept you flowing up//
my bars kill n.y emcees yours just scars and cuts//
1 post should never incure to two//
and the fact that lyrical flow cant get lyrical is true//
we can see your not a gangster we all can see right throw u//

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ill verbaly is my real rap name that or ill vivid if you dont get it then you illitrate these are the battle im currtly in vote and all do the same halla 1.


my open mic as of now check it rate it late
my thoughts
last nights happing

first of all u dont kno who u messing/
for all dat gay shit u gonna need a blessing/
my gun fire up my trigger gonna be clickin/
and u da one dat just got rippin/

Just a reminder its a six line minimum

~F-D~

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Dog I ant got time for act rite im dealing with a dick rider feam//
This Bronx emcee a insufficient to the sickness scripts or hip hops realm//
Do all us a favor and don’t record a your voice over beats//
Matter a fact this the nigga talking bout minmum lines ///
This kid fuckin with big niggas I stay in a criminal mind//
I had hard shit about to post but I felt like I was to hard//
Since your to 101 not ready to spar//

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ill verbaly is my real rap name that or ill vivid if you dont get it then you illitrate these are the battle im currtly in vote and all do the same halla 1.


my open mic as of now check it rate it late
my thoughts
last nights happing

When ur eatin Gravy-n-Shit is the only time u May-Be-Sick
How can u be thug If u've never heard of a Safety-Clip? (on a gun)
You wouldnt be hot even if u camped in a Volcano
Cuz i drop bars harder than the Top-Jail-Hoe

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oh my god this kid whack as hell he the playa Ecko-D?..
Stole the name from his clothes thinkin fame comes for free...
Can't understand a word from his mouth another UKMC...
If garage was hip, then maybe I'd hop but it's not ya wannabe G...
But you ain't no gangsta, and you definately ain't THUG...
You jus another one of those wannabe pencil pullin scrubs...
Pushin punches faster than people runnin mouths...
UK garage MC? you nothin to me, I'm reppin for the south...

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I couldn't resist any longer (Thanks for the feedback lol)

Your from the UK-Too
So if that makes me gay it makes You-Gay-Too
Unless u Wanna-be a Rapper on MTV
But ur only Gunna-be a Slapper with a STD
U dont do garage cuz u cant Hype n Vex ur Voice
Thats why Typing Text is ur Choice
So Groovy to-da Vex to-da Hype
Ur only Moody Cuz u never Had Sex last Night

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36 post and you think your the shit//
Well your rhymes ass little as elmentary rhymes kid//
Don’t be fucking with rip or all have to never let you post//
Taken shots at me is stupid it don’t effect me like a ghost//
I rose from the dead cuss god said I ant finished/
Because echo d still trying to be tight spiting his rites//

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ill verbaly is my real rap name that or ill vivid if you dont get it then you illitrate these are the battle im currtly in vote and all do the same halla 1.


my open mic as of now check it rate it late
my thoughts
last nights happing

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I shouldnt be Wasting my Time cuz u cant even Rhyme
Im elementary? Ur the 1 who cant read between the Lines
Ive never seen someone choke so Much since ur Chick Sucked on my Dick
Ur a 1 Jerk Squirt u Cum as soon as u Touch the Clit
Ur better off going back to ur Grave an Rest
Cuz unless ur the Best, ur Brave but u cant fulfill ur Quest

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i ignore ya kind, cuz this cat couldnt af'four'ed the lines
i mean really, are you stealin. or just borrowing my ryhmes?
non the less, its really not a test.. ack-rite n "step",
kid, you'll be sonned by the best... cuz u equal less
honestly i think your pure hype.. but i sure might
cure this dyke, so in the end you can really act-rite....
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6 line minimum foo.

Who is Jack rackam?!? I oughttah back smack him
Attack em is tooo easy
He rappin tooo cheezy!!!
His actin is bad like Nas in ah movie
His lyrics dont move me
His text is like somethan wrote by Pras from tha FUGEES
Trully
Your fuckin around an you bout tah catch a quick slug
Your bars are Booty
they belong in ah strip club!!!

Ur BASIC.

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