deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm western
check in on Tuesday
verses due on JULY 7wedsday
votes due by the next saturday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

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Boston Checked In

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BOSTON LYRICIST

fuck boston..... * remembers sdizzle is from boston*..... ya go boston

throw u in the charles river...... have u feeling degrated
boston pride i see...... well u saw how the celtics made it
a legacy depleated, ur uneeded.... so understand ur defeated
leave u bleeding....why ur a nut? u were as soon i got the seed in

im tired and dont feel like embarrassing a fellow boston nucca........ yo were u from anyway son

PERSONAL


when it come to this shit boston one of the masters....
lift you up to heaven like birsds jersey in the rapters...
im responsible for your death so i'll break it to your pop..
spilll your blood all over the kitchen and make your moms mop...
im not one to play im metaphorically gifted....
my mind is crazy and lyriaclly cerial killa twisted...
i'll have you chopped up and bagged like fresh fruit...
and since you dieing during this battle i wore a suite...
i'll get you banged out like j lo's ass in a movie.....
if you was an actor in a sex scene you would ask for george clooney...
your skillz lack everything like an athlete wit no legs or arms...
your soft and dont last long like marshmellows from lucky charms...
call me whateva but im bettah....im not def but i will jam you wit ah vandettah..cut off your circulation wit a kanye west sweatah.........
pull out the bareetah and give you some free stuff like a fox goal gettah..


your done son....bostons finest vs the weakest dont eva come at me with some wack shit like that again.................................i'll kill you...........

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BOSTON LYRICIST

vote - sdizzle

he had a 4 line verse....but had punches....and bostonlyricist was horrible....u need to elevate kid.....and stop talking shit when u suck....sdizzle won easily....

I think you both need to elevate through this league if your gonna want to stay in it for long, but I think BostonLyricist had a better verse... this is the punch that won it for me

your skillz lack everything like an athlete wit no legs or arms...
your soft and dont last long like marshmellows from lucky charms... - Good Flow, couple decent lines there.
I think sdizzle coulda pulled this out but he stopped writing after 4 lines and the 4 lines weren't all that nasty.... Vote BostonLyricist. Good Luck in the future.

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wtf is this shit

sdizzle - 4 lines that were OK at the most, but your shit still beat bostonlyricist b/c you actually had some OK punches

bostonlyricist - now WTF. this was by far one of the shittiest verses i have seen in my life. you had no personals. you had little punches that didnt even connect,you flow was all fucked up, and your structure is shit

punches - sdizzle
flow - sdizzle
creativity - sdizzle
personals - sdizzle
length - bostonlyricist ( like that even counts)

v/ sdizzle

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<center>a.k.a Enseign</center>

Sdizzle ur shit

where the fuck were ur punches.....ill break it down.

throw u in the charles river...... have u feeling degrated
First line sucks
boston pride i see...... well u saw how the celtics made it
Your both from boston...ur just dissin where from 2....

a legacy depleated, ur uneeded.... so understand ur defeated
Just filler
leave u bleeding....why ur a nut? u were as soon i got the seed in
Wack.....i dunno what u were attemptin her but u just came out wack

other kid.....drop the fuckin ego...but u at least tried harder

i'll get you banged out like j lo's ass in a movie.....
if you was an actor in a sex scene you would ask for george clooney...

your skillz lack everything like an athlete wit no legs or arms...
your soft and dont last long like marshmellows from lucky charms...

^at least he tried.....ur both a waste in this league.....i hear abiout dizzle alot so trie harder.

Vote Boston lyricist.

vote boston lyricist....well because he put more effort...people if your only going to have two bars then maybe you should have a punch or two that doesn't also affect you...bostons was basic...and not great...but atleast he ahd a couple of punches that weren't also against himself...anyway

vote bl

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sdizzle.....
I liked your verse but the were too less of lines and you were dissing were you both were from...and your lines sounded like they were put together 4 min befor your spit....
BostonL....
your verse was elementry....simple and plain....which was enough to beat him....i didn't see any good punches but you did 10X beter than him....
vote boston lyricist

4-2 BL

Dizzle- boston pride i see...... well u saw how the celtics made it
your dissin your self son...lol
you had an ok verse but more lines would of made it better along with
harder punches..cuz those were weak

6.0/10

BL-your shit was simple...no complexity at all ..simple punches
simple verse...no good punches i saw but you put in more effort which
was enoug..

6.5/10

vote-BL

thread closed...bl wins...5-2

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