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Old 01-21-07, 11:43 AM   #1
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13. Mets (2-0) vs. 14. Prosecuter (3-2)

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Old 01-21-07, 03:10 PM   #2
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Old 01-21-07, 08:20 PM   #3
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coo..then it shall be set
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Old 01-22-07, 09:34 PM   #4
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I saw the predictions,I hope u aint believe'n its true
i'd want u 2 drop dope,since ur the only idiot n the league with a crew
Im cope'n with fear,but u aint gotta chance trying me queer
ill beat u n make ur rec. look like the legal age for buying a beer
u deserve it for being cocky n so quickly decieved
thinkin I'd have a nervous tic,when U suck like a parasite in the league
weak ass bitch i ought to grab ur frame,an stomp till i smash ur brain
so fuck what mets throes,his wack ass is leaven with spasms of pain
vets give u props 4 ur past achievements.. here it stops man
cuz,
u cant WARRANT a good punch,when they're old as the rock band
I might bring sum meh ish,but why is this faker glad
when he brought worse.. that'll even make the sausage makers mad


12.pz.
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Old 01-23-07, 07:31 AM   #5
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12.pz.




^ That's sterotypical..really dude, your ass is about to getta whippin ..
but 12.pz? ..i guess it's true, all blacks really do think about is chicken
^N' i wanted to get ready for the wrestlin match, so i called dude a wimp
slapped ona chicken wing then he dumped hotsauce on my arm n startin chewin it
Plus i hear u mess wit ugly broads, mine hold out a' palm full of cheddar
none of ur chicks are foxworthy but they DO look like his audience members
Try N' slay me, when i creep an' slaughter it's time to pay me
this dude smells like he bathed in enough Creekwater ta get signed by Shady
N' he probaly created that little style he rocks, son's rhymin wit big intent
it's just 2 bad that i recreations, while he needs to find some besides the internet
This guy'll never get respect, i heard his music ...i wasnt at all preparded
shit, his girl doesnt even pump up the volume ..unless it's involvin her hair

g/l.

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Old 01-23-07, 12:08 PM   #6
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vets give u props 4 ur past achievements.. here it stops man
cuz,
u cant WARRANT a good punch,when they're old as the rock band
I might bring sum meh ish,but why is this faker glad
when he brought worse.. that'll even make the sausage makers mad


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That's sterotypical..really dude, your ass is about to getta whippin ..
but 12.pz? ..i guess it's true, all blacks really do think about is chicken
^N' i wanted to get ready for the wrestlin match, so i called dude a wimp
slapped ona chicken wing then he dumped hotsauce on my arm n startin chewin it
N' he probaly created that little style he rocks, son's rhymin wit big intent
it's just 2 bad that i recreations, while he needs to find some besides the internet
This guy'll never get respect, i heard his music ...i wasnt at all preparded
shit, his girl doesnt even pump up the volume ..unless it's involvin her hair


LMAO!! Mets didn't bring his best material but still killed this battle. Some of those bars had me rolling, especially the two opening bars about black guys and chicken, LMFAO!! They were dope. Pros, your main problem was that you had too many played concepts like the punch on his league record, that is played to fuck. Also, crew punches are pretty weak now to. I thought the WARRANT punch was alright, could've been worded better. The sausage punch was pretty decent. I thought the wording was a little poor but still the concept was clear and I got it.Mets just pretty much killed it with his two opening bars, and the recreations and volume punches were decent to.

V/ - Mets
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Old 01-23-07, 11:32 PM   #7
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prosecuter:
I might bring sum meh ish,but why is this faker glad
when he brought worse.. that'll even make the sausage makers mad

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mets:
^ That's sterotypical..really dude, your ass is about to getta whippin ..
but 12.pz? ..i guess it's true, all blacks really do think about is chicken
N' he probaly created that little style he rocks, son's rhymin wit big intent
it's just 2 bad that i recreations, while he needs to find some besides the internet

mets quotables were better, his non-quotables were better, he brought a more consistant and harder hitting verse

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Old 01-24-07, 01:17 AM   #8
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Im cope'n with fear,but u aint gotta chance trying me queer
ill beat u n make ur rec. look like the legal age for buying a beer
I might bring sum meh ish,but why is this faker glad
when he brought worse.. that'll even make the sausage makers mad

vs

^ That's sterotypical..really dude, your ass is about to getta whippin ..
but 12.pz? ..i guess it's true, all blacks really do think about is chicken
Try N' slay me, when i creep an' slaughter it's time to pay me
this dude smells like he bathed in enough Creekwater ta get signed by Shady
This guy'll never get respect, i heard his music ...i wasnt at all preparded
shit, his girl doesnt even pump up the volume ..unless it's involvin her hair

This battle was ok. Nothing for me to complain about really. Both came in with some good stuff. Pros came in way better then what I expected him too from past verses Iv seen. Mets didn't come AS tight as Nick said but he came tight. Opening line was the best in the battle. some up n down shit in both verses but Mets gets my votes on more quotables and better punches.

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Old 01-24-07, 08:23 AM   #9
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vets give u props 4 ur past achievements.. here it stops man
cuz,
u cant WARRANT a good punch,when they're old as the rock band
I might bring sum meh ish,but why is this faker glad
when he brought worse.. that'll even make the sausage makers mad

vs.

^ That's sterotypical..really dude, your ass is about to getta whippin ..
but 12.pz? ..i guess it's true, all blacks really do think about is chicken
^N' i wanted to get ready for the wrestlin match, so i called dude a wimp
slapped ona chicken wing then he dumped hotsauce on my arm n startin chewin it
Plus i hear u mess wit ugly broads, mine hold out a' palm full of cheddar
none of ur chicks are foxworthy but they DO look like his audience members

Mets just came with better lines more up to date, Pro you had a lot of played material...

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Old 01-24-07, 12:08 PM   #10
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vets give u props 4 ur past achievements.. here it stops man
cuz,
u cant WARRANT a good punch,when they're old as the rock band
I might bring sum meh ish,but why is this faker glad
when he brought worse.. that'll even make the sausage makers mad

vs

^ That's sterotypical..really dude, your ass is about to getta whippin ..
but 12.pz? ..i guess it's true, all blacks really do think about is chicken
^N' i wanted to get ready for the wrestlin match, so i called dude a wimp
slapped ona chicken wing then he dumped hotsauce on my arm n startin chewin it
Plus i hear u mess wit ugly broads, mine hold out a' palm full of cheddar
none of ur chicks are foxworthy but they DO look like his audience members
Try N' slay me, when i creep an' slaughter it's time to pay me
this dude smells like he bathed in enough Creekwater ta get signed by Shady

Mets came some real humerous lines. Pro's verse wasnt real consistent but he had some okay w/p here in there.

V/ Mets
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Old 01-24-07, 04:26 PM   #11
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vets give u props 4 ur past achievements.. here it stops man
cuz,
u cant WARRANT a good punch,when they're old as the rock band
^ ^DECENT WORDPLAY ATTEMPT

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but 12.pz? ..i guess it's true, all blacks really do think about is chicken
^ ^DAMN
This guy'll never get respect, i heard his music ...i wasnt at all preparded
shit, his girl doesnt even pump up the volume ..unless it's involvin her hair
^ ^KINDA FUNNY

vote: Mets

I wasn't overly impressed with either cat but the quotes that I put to me were good. Mets just had one more.
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Old 01-24-07, 04:42 PM   #12
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Im cope'n with fear,but u aint gotta chance trying me queer
ill beat u n make ur rec. look like the legal age for buying a beer
vets give u props 4 ur past achievements.. here it stops man
cuz,
u cant WARRANT a good punch,when they're old as the rock band
neva hrd of the band but i'll take ur word on it


vs.


^ That's sterotypical..really dude, your ass is about to getta whippin ..
but 12.pz? ..i guess it's true, all blacks really do think about is chicken
Plus i hear u mess wit ugly broads, mine hold out a' palm full of cheddar
none of ur chicks are foxworthy but they DO look like his audience members
N' he probaly created that little style he rocks, son's rhymin wit big intent
it's just 2 bad that i recreations, while he needs to find some besides the internet

i got mets takin this one. pro came alright, his opener was weak to me and his closer + spasms of pain jus read like filler to me. mets came pretty cool. opener was roflz. i saw a creekwater line used a couple weeks ago, so that wasn't that fresh to me.

v/ mets.
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Old 01-26-07, 10:25 AM   #13
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That's sterotypical..really dude, your ass is about to getta whippin ..
but 12.pz? ..i guess it's true, all blacks really do think about is chicken
^N' i wanted to get ready for the wrestlin match, so i called dude a wimp
slapped ona chicken wing then he dumped hotsauce on my arm n startin chewin it
This guy'll never get respect, i heard his music ...i wasnt at all preparded
shit, his girl doesnt even pump up the volume ..unless it's involvin her hair

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Im cope'n with fear,but u aint gotta chance trying me queer
ill beat u n make ur rec. look like the legal age for buying a beer
vets give u props 4 ur past achievements.. here it stops man
cuz,
u cant WARRANT a good punch,when they're old as the rock band

pro came pretty good, much better than i expected, had a good verse with some slight misses, if you keep trying like this, you'll win next time
mets came entertaining the 1st half of his verse and let up as he went
but had enough punches to win tha battle in the end
v/ mets
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Old 01-26-07, 12:05 PM   #14
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This has enough votes.

Dudes, go vote on something else.
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Old 01-27-07, 12:53 PM   #15
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Prosecuter:
vets give u props 4 ur past achievements.. here it stops man
cuz,
u cant WARRANT a good punch,when they're old as the rock band
I might bring sum meh ish,but why is this faker glad
when he brought worse.. that'll even make the sausage makers mad

vs.

Mets:
^ That's sterotypical..really dude, your ass is about to getta whippin ..
but 12.pz? ..i guess it's true, all blacks really do think about is chicken
^N' i wanted to get ready for the wrestlin match, so i called dude a wimp
slapped ona chicken wing then he dumped hotsauce on my arm n startin chewin it
Try N' slay me, when i creep an' slaughter it's time to pay me
this dude smells like he bathed in enough Creekwater ta get signed by Shady
N' he probaly created that little style he rocks, son's rhymin wit big intent
it's just 2 bad that i recreations, while he needs to find some besides the internet
This guy'll never get respect, i heard his music ...i wasnt at all preparded
shit, his girl doesnt even pump up the volume ..unless it's involvin her hair

Ha.. Mets obviously takes this win. No need from any explanation.

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