aight

Crysis -

aight homie you know I like this shit, Its simular to phates but with a diffrent fresh style. is like a nice story track. I could picture this on somones albums for real. Nice work

9 out of 10



Auspicious -

Ok this is realy odd seems like you didnt work hard at this at all. Like they said about sounds like you just pasted wave files in soundforge or somthing. this is not to good homie sorry Keep learning and asking questions you will get beter

2 out of 10

Vote Crysis

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Crysis - wow. this was sick. the way u combined the chord n the picks lines was fuckin so dope. drums were dope. vocal cuts fit in pretty much perfect. there were a couple sounds in sum of the background of the cuts that didn't fit perfect, but it was real minor shit. 9 / 10

auspicous - hmm. i understand sum of the concepts u were going for as far as the intro, but honestly, i wouldn't even worry bout intro's or transitions at your level. just take the drum loop, cut sum 4 -5 second pieces out of the samples and practice laying them over the drum loop. 1 /10

vote crysis

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