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Old 09-04-05, 03:31 PM   #1
chip
pain is weakness leaving the body
 
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just a verse

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this is just a verse, might help u wit your problems but i doubt it,
this iz my fucked up life, and me spittin about it,
now don't go preachin to a nigga, your boy ain't suicidal,
this ain't nuthin but a verse, mafucka read the title,
i hate it when people take me too serious,
like they got sticks up they ass or a permanent period,
but it gets worse when a nigga alwayz clownin,
act like your best friends, then wanna put u down and,
that might be okay, for somebody who can take it,
i've been thru it a while, ain't scared to face it,
but it weighs down on me, like it's tearin at my soul,
when deep inside, i wanna cry, swearin at u 'holes,
but u think i'm playin', just like i'm simple as u,
want fun?, i understand your point, that's just a simple ass view
life ain't all fun and games, there's consequences,
and reprecussions for every one of your ventures,
life's more than 16 bars and a few good lines,
your peronality ain't what u say but what's on your mind,
so i'ma realease mine, now see the real me,
more than your boy C, i'm more than poetry,
more than freestyles, more than meets the eye,
i'm heard on more than rapverse, i'm more than TTI,
more than The Ghetto Dr. Seus, more than what i'm doin,
u HAVE to respect me, i'm u, i'm just human.

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Old 09-04-05, 03:49 PM   #2
Viva
Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
 
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nice verse, lol

flowed real well,
life's more than 16 bars and a few good lines,
your peronality ain't what u say but what's on your mind,
^^^thats a gr8 bar!

nice 1, keep em coming.
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