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08-16-05, 07:40 PM
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Metropolis
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Hoe Nigga
IP: B52C 6258
Chorus:
Now i aint sayin you a hoe nigga But you talkin kinda bold nigga Now I aint sayin you a hoe nigga But you aint messin wit the flow nigga Get down bitch, gah head and get down (get down) Get down bitch , gah head and get down( get down) Get down bitch , gah head and get down ( get down) Get down bitch , gah head and get down (get down) Check me out... Look, ...some of yall trynna act like City just aint tight They like, City ight, but man City just aint nice But City just aint trife..... Some of yall just mad because Big City just aint hype My bars new growth, flows newer than the First Yall niggas is dead, rather you be in a sewer than a hearse Im ready to blitz like im Boomer on the jerk and Yall think City's a joke cuz its a lil humor in my verse? nawww you a loser and the worst, ......clowns that ever came in the game,.. so who doin for a murk? My dames that i claim the type to keep a Rueger in the purse A pocket wit kick-back, and a pocket of tick-tacs You all aint hard, wit a couple lame tatoos Ya wack, even the ocean wouldn't wave at you I would say thats true Im takin my shit back, in fact gimme the game back too Chorus: Now i aint sayin you a hoe nigga But you talkin kinda bold nigga Now I aint sayin you a hoe nigga But you aint messin wit the flow nigga Get down bitch, gah head and get down (get down) Get down bitch , gah head and get down( get down) Get down bitch , gah head and get down ( get down) Get down bitch , gah head and get down (get down) . Uh oh uh oh,.... its the deepest flower I got some windex,... now ya streak is ova Damn, hand me the mail i gotta address some shit Cuz lately, i been feelin all perplexed and shit Its Sherlock Homeboy on some detective shit Trynna find the nigga talkin greasy and wreck his shit Take a Louisville slugga and compress his shit Im like Hank Aaron, yall need to respect the hits I dont mind, i love when you push Cuz im trynna battle niggas mo than George W. Bush Wait, stop,... hold up nig I aint a terrorist, but the City bout to blow up BIG Not a ashamed by far, im proud of tha name Im Ref'n this shit, and yall dudes is outta the game Ya run might be done in about 5 days cuz the 8 like Paul wall, it'll have you "sittin sideways" Chorus: Now i aint sayin you a hoe nigga But you talkin kinda bold nigga Now I aint sayin you a hoe nigga But you aint messin wit the flow nigga Get down bitch, gah head and get down (get down) Get down bitch , gah head and get down( get down) Get down bitch , gah head and get down ( get down) Get down bitch , gah head and get down (get down) I aint sayin you a hoe nigga, but you got mouth And every time i roll through, then you bounce out Yall niggas tried and lost, now its I the boss You can't charge me wit nothin, i deny the cost Haha.....Now its I who floss And im never hesitant to vocalize my thoughts You not in the top 50, maybe the best of last Yall trash, too busy gettin ya rectum smashed For cash, you can bet that i serve it well Yall lil worms prolly go to jail, squirm and tell Maybe you will learn the smell, when i burn the L's Im movin sick, like City got germs to sell Most of these mc's hollow as logs I can see the bitch in you niggas like you swallowed a dog I bring the heat wit the truth now I caught a case, cuz Judge said i was beatin the booth down Get down bitch, gah head and get down (get down) Get down bitch , gah head and get down( get down) Get down bitch , gah head and get down ( get down) Get down bitch , gah head and get down (get down) hahha i dont even be goin hard on this mixtape shit.........shout out to the S.W.A.T Team, The Cartel comin soon. lets get the money |
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08-26-05, 11:32 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 8A05 210E
ight 1st thangz 1st i'm not hating or nethang but tha topic of diz piece is bout Hoe Niggaz den in ur 1st & most of ur 2nd verses all u talk bout is how view u & ur braggin on urself da whole time, u gotta address dem Ho Niggaz from tha beginning 2 tha end & also throw sum comments bout urself in there..pick ur parts 2 do dat, structure was on point nice, only time u address dez hoe niggaz was in ur 3rd verse completely, i like tha use of meta's in ya piece fa sho, keep writing cuz u got potential
~1~LUV~1~THUG~ rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206095
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09-04-05, 03:12 PM
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pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: 0F8C 09C6
iight playa.......... okay piece, but looks more like a song than a freestyle......... topic was hoe niggaz, but most of your verses was self-glorification....... nice structure and okay flow, but you should up your vocab (but i guess it isn't too bad if this iz really a freestyle)....... okay i guess........ overall 7/10....... it was funny, but u should try harder to stay on topic if u have one....... keep it comin playa
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