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Old 02-08-06, 10:17 AM   #1
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Babygurl...A song 4 wifey

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This is a song i made personally 4 my shorty. Please excuse the quality. Theres a constant hiss in the background of my vocals. but it aint horrible. peep this shit and gimme sum feedback.

www.soundclick.com/con1
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Old 02-08-06, 10:19 AM   #2
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id get ur 2 links before this is closed... do that and ill reply.
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Old 02-08-06, 10:26 AM   #3
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what do u mean by 2 links?
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Old 02-08-06, 10:31 AM   #4
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you have to drop feed on two other mcs and provide links to show that you did.
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Old 02-08-06, 10:34 AM   #5
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Old 02-08-06, 10:44 AM   #6
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Old 02-08-06, 10:44 AM   #7
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there u go. now sum1 gimme sum feedback..
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Old 02-08-06, 12:09 PM   #8
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alright i'm listening now

you sound good your flow and pressense is hot...we gotta collab on a track man,i like your style

hmm....

if you had better quailty(which you will if you let me mix your stuff in our collab)

then you'd be really really fire

i'm feeling it fam

stay up

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Old 02-08-06, 12:12 PM   #9
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iight, good looks man. im up 4 a collab. i'll hit u up....
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Old 02-08-06, 12:37 PM   #10
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i dont like this beat, too cheasy for me... not my thing but ill look past that, flow is cool but theres times u drop suttin slower/faster the rest i dont like the way u have big pauses in between some stuff, yeh quality is off... ur presence and delivery is good though, lyrics serve there purpose but are abit basic... hook is ok, yeman pretty cool shit, mainly im not feeling it cos its not my style but u got good abilities on a mic so cnt knock that.
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Old 02-08-06, 01:14 PM   #11
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iight..guess everyone is entitled to their own opinions..
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Old 02-08-06, 01:18 PM   #12
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listnin................................

beats low and has ......................and im not feelin it........

voice is good on this type track.......................

flowz good.................................

deleiveryz nice................................

quality could be improved......................

lyrics r nice...........................

overall pretty decent for tha type...............

7/10 werd stay up
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Old 02-08-06, 01:46 PM   #13
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iight............................................. .................................................
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Old 02-11-06, 04:12 PM   #14
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Yo This Jawn Iight The Beat Ill To Me You Rap Kinda Like Chris From Young Gunz Everything On Point Seem Like You Know What You Doing
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Old 02-11-06, 04:20 PM   #15
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good looks. keep shit craccin homie.
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