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damn...hard battle to choose from here honestly.....Rockin had some nice wordplay...but Tech had better developed punches and strucuture....good battle....heres a breakdown for u two...

BREAKDOWN
Metas - Rockin
Wordplay - Rockin
Punches - Tech
Strucuture - Tech
Flow - Tech
Vocab - Tie
RhymeScheme - Tie
Overall - hard battle to choose like i said in the begining...but Tech gets this just for having harder punches.....if Rockin would've thrown more direct hitting punches instead of relying on wordplay so much he wouldve definitely had this battle.....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote..

peace

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d/r vote.....many ppl have brought to my attention you are best friends and live right down the street......

many people.... more like one propably (illunatic) aint yall hoes in the same crew agents or shit...."make you famous"....rrriiiggghhhttt

plus you said i had no multies......and i had plenty.....

I would like to see where you had aleast one multie....thought so you didnt rhyme off a word atleast four times...until you show me....shut up

READ a verse......than throw in your 2 cents.......

I did read a verse...I read two of them...and its then not than

but Rock if you wanna keep the vote you can.........

it was a honest vote so blah

(show me your multies tech)

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^ok.....agents isnt a crew.......we just keep people in line

upppn...........................this bitch.........................like a wonderbra,............................

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Punches - Flames Hit Wayy Harder ... tech .. elevate dawg
Flow & Structure = Tie .. both very nice
Personals = Blah ... None Really Sparked My Attention
Entertainment - Flames Was Very Comical

Vote = Flames

Qoutable Lines:

TECH-

A W I pick it like fences, leave u stripped & defenseless

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Nice wordplay.....not much of a punch

Treat us like royalty cuz when I ask for u I say "where my son at"

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Getting played...but you put a good twist on it, nice punch


My lines get longer toward the end cuz i'm stretchin your neck
I've wasted good punches on you so you catchin' wats -L-eft

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Alright closer, not too great though


-ROCK-

You bout to get quick burnt than rolled like One Joint
Tha truth is you couldnt Move A Crowd at Gun Point

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Smooth opener, first line was cracked but the second was a hrad punch

And then you fell off and went--- Down down down......


Tech gets my vote for more consistent punches, you guys did good for 20lines in 20 mins, but Tech had the punches.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103208

I can't fucking edit my post so here.....follow this link


And I will poll vote in a second

TECH verse

Damn 20 lines max thats a fuckin line a minute...
I know I'm keyin but you got somthin pre-writtin
I chose blind spit, and It's my prefrence for a time limit
I Re-wind gimics, take it to you and Wrap this Gift Kid*
My presence, rips apart every word in your sentence
A W I pick it like fences, leave u stripped & defenseless
Man ta battle with me you must be crippled and senseless
You ain't walkin' away now you've tripled ya repentence
Your structure is wack, ya verse dont even function at that
I got punches ta match, 6 of ur verses crunched in this rap
No matter how hard you force yourself ta lunge it's a scratch
When Rb wants ta eat they look here I put lunch on tha map
Adjust ta tha facts, move ya bitch ass inta tha brunt of my axe
So blunt you attack, I could smoke you and give some of it back
Think you could trick me into crackin' under time and pressure
Foolish.....you verse is slackin' no wonder u rhyme like'a jester
Your nothin but somthin for us emcees to point and poke fun at
Treat us like royalty cuz when I ask for u I say "where my son at"
My lines get longer toward the end cuz i'm stretchin your neck
I've wasted good punches on you so you catchin' wats -L-eft


--vote down--
tech had multies,personals,metas,hard pounches, good structure it allowed your verse to flow right....

ROCKIN verse

You bout to get quick burnt than rolled like One Joint
Tha truth is you couldnt Move A Crowd at Gun Point
Im like a fat fuckin virgin wit battles Hard To Lose
So dont forget ya apron Bitch im servin beef like Barbecues
While your at Value Village Technician up in Expensive Stores
Ima beat tha black off ya like racist cops usin Excessive Force
I Break Alot of tha Fake Who Thought they would Make It Hot
And your one of em now how bout you jus let me Take Ya Spot
Coughin up ur shot just ta spit ill but ya witts killed by childrens brain teasers
Sluts reppin a crew but steppin ta Rock1n' just another over excited cheer leader
Cause right now I know you gettin alot more Thinner And Frail
Cause you get No Respect like Chrit Bein In Jail**
My Type Of Skills is Hype And Ill your kinds More Than Wack
My Punchlines are crushin you like tha Buckaneer QuarterBack
So now you know ima pro I bet you like Hes A Vet
Your styles old like tha fuckin Mold from a Chea Pet
You's a bitch,geek, and ho in life, Despite Loner
Now I know why you chose to be tha Site stoner

---vote down--
no hard pounches really didn't stand out compared to Tech's verse,no personals ok structure some wordplay


---------my vote------
my vote goes to tech for a much stronger verse with harder pounches and personals multies and metas

vote for my battle in sig
no hate jus a vote
peace

uppin
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Good Battle So Vote

I actually think Rockin' took this, his punches hit harder when i read through. Tech had good flow and rhyme scheme and structure but Rockin' takes this by far on punches in my opinion, just more to them. I didin't see this as even that close, maybe i missed something.
Anyhow, Rockin' gets my vote

drop an honest vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102575

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escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

Tech
you came pretty hard for a newbie and you had some good lines and constivly tryed punches i did see a few played line such as
that Snatch line


Rock
Dude your line was a filler no punches the fuck you need to evulate kid check our some tutorials in W.E.C and im not being mean im being serious i see some talent in u but first u need to learn how to punch anyway no hate u can get better Pz.

Vote= Tech

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