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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
Eki | 5 | 100.00% | |
Tolerant Level | 0 | 0% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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01-02-04, 10:26 PM | #16 |
Banned
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IP: 1B3B C284
------------Eki verse--------
Am sick of these puppets, with pre-sets Behaving like muppets, children with no facts Mature up, understand, You still have time to grow, To lyrically and physically, become a man You want hours to bust a couple of lines? Give me 10 minutes, wanna borrow some of my rhymes? I know this shit is complicated, Skippy* Your getting sun cancer, your skin looking freckly , freaky You cant flow , this shit is deadly, rather extreme You redneck, isn’t your country still under the Queen?** Why are you Australian’s natural followers, it makes me vomit Go learn your history, you came to that island as Convicts***. I know you dont understand history, and there is still things in this world you haven’t yet seen relax, you just into puberty, your only sixteen ^^good battle alote of fuckin funny personals and pounches great wordplay and meta^^ (still laughing) better strutre and flow ------------tolerent verse---------------- Eki u was feel the ~Power and Wrath~ im the man who brang the ~Towers to Crap~ and i snaped ur ~spine in Half~ cause when i read ur verse i ~Cryied and Laughed~// listen ur ~Twisted Paragraghs~ cant complete the system of u getting ~Fisted to first Class~ and my verses demonstrate and u ~admitted ur Last~// the interventions ~trick ur mind~the games comence when u dumb and ~Thick u cant ryhme~// as ur body and organs decide to ~Chrode Instantly~and ur intestines churn in a matter of seconds and ~Erode Constantly~// when u ~Turtore ur Lungs~ like in the states in NY is look once and u will get a ~puncture from Guns~// man u wanna talk about ~Borrowing Rymes~ man u being beggind me to be ~loaning my crimes~// if u could just think...and do some ~Connecting Punches~mayber u might win a battle instead of ~infecting Kids Lunches~ and maybe u will live another day but now... ur ~Creamating ur Dead Hunches// ok verse you need elevate but you did good work on you structre will help your verse flow no hate jus a vote overall EKI takes the poll vote vote on battles in my sig i took the time peace |
01-02-04, 11:31 PM | #17 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 1272 5AFE
Eki got this wit betta structure,metas,flow,yea basically erything.......
Tol ur structure messed u up same wit flow.....wasnt feelin it jus elevate man ull get good......... VOTE- EKI |
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01-02-04, 11:46 PM | #18 | |
Guest
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IP: 05DA F67A
nice spit eki to bad i cant vote
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01-03-04, 01:05 AM | #19 |
Mass Apeal
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IP: 4577 CD9A
punches- Tol(harder....more thougth put into them)
flo- tie(both had bad flo) structure- eki(tolerance has the wakest multi structure ive seen) multi's-Tol(what can i say....it's all he had) meti4's-eki(close but he seemed more original with his) personals-eki(tolerance didnt have any at all) overall-eki(close but that wak over-multi structure doom'd tolerance...) had he not over done it...he mighta won this. YO EKI, you forgo to poll bote on my battle |
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