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You get sun~ned-like 7 am is when the battle begun-
I should endorse shoes cause I’ll de~feet you 2 ways…..
That’s a victory, AND1.
You either dickride to copy write dictate-
Or cock jock to invest stock in my dick taste.
Yeah you’re the phat shit but I mean it in its literal state-
Cause your garbage is obeast human waste.
Go ahead and talk your trash-
All that"Now noncentz got a little love so he GASSED-"
But I how is that…..
When I surpass you wack rappers and refused to be PASSED….
your the one giving me man~o, getting my butt swole-
Next time I rhyme I should just put a mistletoe over my asshole.
I get so much shit,” why do you spit so enhanced?”
Well its mans nature is to evolve….
so why shouldn’t my scripts advance?
360 means to revolve- but I don’t want to be back to square 1-
I want to be me squared and comparable to none.
A total eclipse will whisk from my disc the day I fall of-
The industry will suffer a travesty similar to the holocaust.
But even after I die the most high will release my cd on mp3 or Microsoft-
Fuck it he’d even drop the 8 track version just to piss you off.
Just to prove the fact that compared to me your wack-
Id go plat off a single…that’s one song that rips all 17 of your tracks.
When I open my mouth-
the monoxide mixes with oxegen and creates a droubt-
that hydrated when its exhausted out-
with no doubt it forms a winter solstis-
battle you the day of your record release-
and get paid in condolence- cause when it drops so do you deceased.
Its fucking shame it seams if I cant clone-
I cant get in the game let alone be herd on a microphone.
Fuck that we created and inseminated these minds- since before 79-
The shit we spit was the original scoliosis effecting kids spines.
And now im told I need to get with the times?
that’s like telling me im the only one looking ahead while your in rewind.
Afros came back so did plat-forms and the refusing to reform to comform-
Instead of being acousted your excepted if your not norm.
So real music will come back
And when it does ill be there to fuck you all with no rubber-
Till then we just waiting for our turn again…like light skinned brothers.

THIS IS SOME ILL SHIT WORD. YOUR FLOW WAS ON POINT. YOU NEVER LOST FOCUS IN THIS PIECE, VOCAB, MULTIS ALL GREAT.
A 9.5/10

YO HIT UP THIS LINK AND DROP SOME FEED BACK.
ITS MY NEW INSTALMENT OF THE REBELION STORY.
THX, PEACE.
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Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.

i gotta agree, ya use of words is sublime......rally gets ya point across......yet again sum good shit...jus like ma weed...lol....pZ

damn man i miss weed seriously i need green bad

lol....But yeah i agree this was a good piece here.....i enjoyed reading this piece...flow in this was real nice, stayed on point through out it, didnt really fall off at all...Liked the multies you used....and your vocab was nice in this....overall this was a good piece here...keep at it.

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VERY GOOD DROP...Feeling This...Flow Was Sick and Consisted Of Very Meaningfull Bars ...Some Bars Were Fillers But That was Tha ONLY Problem

-9.5/10

-Peace