10-15lines max
no feedon
no recylin
drop in 25 minutes

You this fag spits rhymes (thinkin-he-Jesus)
going againts me with lines is (Like Eatin a Fetus)
(I_Mean-This) Beat me????you be better off just (Beattin ya Penis)

Never knowin the outcome of what this (fight might bring)
you get beat by a (Anthropoligist) and still (think) you a (Mic King)
ya rhymes are waisted-like racist sayin its a (white thing)

these bitches in here really think i tryed before/
LMFAO at these bitches askin for my support

flabby ass bitch who hasn't seen his dick in years
in ya av you can see it next to his ears

cuz that aint a mic in ya hand its sombodys dick
think cuz he licks pricks his rhymes would be sick
you must swollow cuz we all know you don't spit

fuck this battle its over with

yo .... that was so pretty hot shit

good punches....nice personals......hot flow

overall - good rap

ill vote on this shit when mic king posts his verse

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aite....

Good luck? Bitch, don’t switch up your game//
Wished me luck cuz you were hoping I would wish you the same//
Cuz you know you’ll need it; all my scripts are great//
I don’t want you to get lucky and beat me, so I won’t reciprocate//
And luck strikes in strange ways; it’s due to happen//
Like in the form of my Gateway computer crashing//
I pack a pistol pen; you know my shit will win//
You should post with longer bars to fit more disses in//
I’m proving I am a menace; you’ll lose when I end this sentence//

You shouldn’t have spit, how much you going to risk? //
I got this kid all up in arms like a deodorant stick//
Kid don’t try to front, I’m the reason you fell//
I’ll kill you, then kill myself just to see you in hell//
There’s no stopping this, so what the fuck you hoping for? //
I rock cement shoes just to jog on the ocean floor//

breakdown=
punches=mic
flow=mic
sustainment=mic
structure=mic
metas=mic
overall=mic
easy win for him pz

OPner: None
Closer: 1liner
Flow: Mic
Personals: Mic
Punches: Mic
Win: Mic

Can yall hit this up with a fair vote? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92298

comon now Brix thats a D/r vote and i know it
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opening- mic
flow - both
punches - both
personals - 1liner
metas - mic
structure - both
closing - 1liner
overall - i think that this shit was a tie..just my opinion...

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nice battle but 1liner took it...

struc-1liner
punches-1liner
flow-mic
metas-1liner
vocab-1liner

1liner won this battle by punches..if it wasnt for his punches mic would of won..but then again whats a verse without a punch

1liner had a couplegood disses, mic kign had a much better flow, much better delivery, all the way around a better rap...he lacked a lil bit behind 1l liner in hsi hardest dis...you must swollow cuz we all know you don't spit
that lien was hot but...I’ll kill you, then kill myself just to see you in hell//
that was hot, overall mic was better, he won this shit..sorry kid

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<center>HemiSphere
The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

yo i read the shit over again since it was so close and change my vote.... 1liner won this battle, not by much, but he won....

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uppin this piece we need closure .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........

u voting for envy then him chagning his vote an VOTING FOR u
uhh thats not dik rydin
its D/r to the fullest
herbssssssss
why cant u get h onets votessssssssssssssss

I think this was a onesided battle, Mic took all of it............

punches, creativity, floh, structure...all of it went to Mic

Vote: Mic

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