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07-20-04, 12:43 AM
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howdy
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schema vs. SLUGGA
IP: 729B 478F
10 bars or more
no silly voting shit due at 1:45
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07-20-04, 12:45 AM
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howdy
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IP: 729B 478F
this is my check in
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"Frank White the menacin, chron chron's the medicine.... I got the lettuce and... ...you turn green like cucumber skin Got the new hummer in the summer when I was a new comer then... drugs and mac-10's...hugs from fake friends..." Quote:
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07-20-04, 12:47 AM
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New to RB
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
Im Checking In So
U Dont Think Im Scared Thanks But It All War Now
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 I CANT BE WITIF YOU NOT WIT ME YOU AGAINST ME AND IM READY 4 WAR PEACEBATTLES DAT NEEDS VOTES |
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07-20-04, 01:05 AM
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
DA GLOCK DONE COMMITED SOME LETHAL SINZ
AND HE STAU ON MY SIDE SO I GOT A LETHAL FRIEND/ IM A REAL NIGGA I'LL MAKE YOU SHIT YA HEART, AND I GOT ALOT AND I AINT TALKING BOUT FLIPPIN NO CARDS/ IM TALKIN BOUT FLIPPIN YA CAR, YOU SHOULD CALL LIL FLIP DA WAY I FLIP THESE BARS/ I DONT GOT TO GET SERIOUS IM JUS HAVIN SOME FUN, LEAVE YA SHIRT RED AND I AINT TALKIN BOUT RUM SEE IM A TRU SOULJAH, AND REDRUM SPELLED BACKWORD EQUALS MURDER/ AND THATS WHERE YA HEADED, AND THIS VERSE GO LEAVE HEADLESS/  
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07-20-04, 01:44 AM
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howdy
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IP: 729B 478F
some people'll hate me for killin all these noobs like they cattle
but actually this kid was real sure that he wanted this battle he private messaged me at 6 but then he ducked me till night came yep this the best he could prewrite in an 8 HOUR TIMEFRAME why i keep spendin battle credits on these cats that need practice he wanted to write the full ten BARS but couldnt think of more wackness i go easy on the herbs...but still im always gon' get-wins dude cant even speak english take a look at his check-in no real crew wants him...this "rapperz" rollin "exclusive" he wants to win a battle....damn those votes are elusive and aint just me the whole board knows hes that wack thinks he good...only thing he got on 'lock' is the 'caps' his whole shit is boring...i cant get past the fourth word-down if hes from crunkville id hate to see the poor bastard from herb-town slugga please tell me how you thought this would come out shoulda battled me at 6.....i coulda won this by now youve read my battles dog you knew what i could do to you instead of askin me for beef you should be askin me to tutor you so after this i might spend time and even help you do well and you can come back again and battle me in two-thousand twelve
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"Frank White the menacin, chron chron's the medicine.... I got the lettuce and... ...you turn green like cucumber skin Got the new hummer in the summer when I was a new comer then... drugs and mac-10's...hugs from fake friends..." Quote:
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07-20-04, 01:59 AM
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
I Ment To Say
I Got Alot Tricks And I Aint Talkin Flippin Cards But Good Shit Schema But Lets Get Some Votes
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07-20-04, 02:03 AM
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©Lyrical Masterpiece©
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IP: 4550 84E0
Opening:Schema
Wordplay:Schema Flow:Schema Punhes:Schema Personals:Schema Do i really have to go on any longer??? V/Schema |
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07-20-04, 04:13 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 0D28 B715
aight this was a 1 sided battle the whole way,slugga your verse was pretty simple,some of your lines did'nt ryme n that redrum/murder backwards epitome was lame,bad structure work on your syllable count for better flow,
schema:thought your verse was funny shit,ya had humour in your whole verse n had structure on lock personal punches were alright,n ya dint bother talkin bout gansta shit which was good ta see... VOTE/SCHEMA RETURN THE FAVOUR I NEED SOME SERIOUSLY HONEST "EXPLAINED"VOTES ON THESE: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134418 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135134 |
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07-20-04, 04:31 AM
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
SLUGGA
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...dont type in all caps either...cause it looks gay...structure is decent...flow fell off a little...u had no multis...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals... schema structure was ok...ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a little due to the stretchnes...u had a few multis...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...personals were pretty good... Overall both had a decent structure...both had an alright flow...schema had more multis...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...schema gets my vote... VOTE - SCHEMA |
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07-20-04, 04:58 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 6AD2 8F43
shchema won.without a doubt..........
slugga weak punches...structure woz fucked .no wordplay.elevate man svhema gud flow/structure decent wordplay multies u won coz ur punches were a lot harder vote-schema RETURN THA FAV PLZ http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135179 |
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07-20-04, 05:55 AM
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IP: EC0B 84C7
my vote goes to schema, slugga didn't have any punches or personals, and he wasn't consistent with his flow
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