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11-16-03, 06:49 PM | #1 | |||||||
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5. Mystery~murdera (3-1) vs. 6. A2Z (2-0)
IP: 97D0 777A
Check-In's Due: Wednesday
Verses Due: Friday Votes Due: Sunday No Biting, Recycling, D/Ring. If you do, you will be banned from this league and possibly the site. Be sure to vote on at least 3 battles, and posts links in this thread. For each battle you don't vote in, you will have that many votes subtracted Your topic: Tainted Rhythm
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11-16-03, 09:34 PM | #2 | |||||||
[.Eclipse.]
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IP: 6588 491C
hi kids, do you like violence?
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11-16-03, 09:46 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
wow...Tag'd and SS
...This Means Something... *Contacts Ms. Cleo* |
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11-21-03, 05:09 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
im going 16 lines, macth me
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11-21-03, 05:26 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Plummet Beneath Earth Greens...Come Meet The Undead
& Come Hear The Tainted Rhythm Alive Inside My Head Mocking Laughter Always Broods...Such A Shelll Of A Life Find Myself Hating The Day...But Fearing The Come Of Night I Just Come Alive... A Soul Live And Die By The Streetlight Hailing All The Garbage Halos...In Fear Cluchting Wreath Tight No Reason To Exist...The Voices Never Imagine To Forgive Just Writhing In The Pain... But I've Grown A Sense To Love It The Man In My Skull Says To Avoid..No Choice But To Persist Wake Up In The Morning ...With Visions Of A Burning Crucifix Nagging Pain In My Core..A Pain That Remains Unnamed At Wake Pleading With God To End Life...He Remains Unweigned I Cant Take It Anymore...Camels Back Is Breaking By The Grain The Life I Live Is Deadly...Of Tainted Percussion And Of Pain |
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11-21-03, 10:50 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 6588 491C
....Free Thoughts (My Akward Walk)
So My Rhythms A Little Tainted... My Walks A Little Akward I Carry A Pistol To Protect Me... Cuz My Consciense Is A Stalker All This Nonsense Is Offered & Like Adam From Eve i Take It Swallow n Digest Till The World Spins N I Cant See Where My Space Went Impatient For Success Yet Patient For What It Brings I'm Filthy - Even My Trunk of Life Is Surrounded By Rings The Sound Clings To My Every Wish & My Every Desire But Theres my Stalker Pursuing To Give Up, Let Die, n Retire How Can I Uplift and Inspire? My Feelings Are True but My Moods A Liar under so much heat, The pills take me higher, away from the fire What Can Be Worse? Here I Fall Asleep Anxious n Wake Up Tired Then I smile Like A Liar, I Walk that Walk n I talk that talk Dance with a Slightly Tainted Rhythm and Step With an Akward Walk - Mystery
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11-22-03, 06:57 AM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 6588 491C
edited b4 votes
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11-22-03, 12:34 PM | #8 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
Wow..This is one of the toughest SS matches I judged
A2Z has the imagery category on lock, his story was well presented, flow and structure was there, and it was one of the best verses to be done. M.M You have the similies and the metaphors which really gave an interesting effect to the verse. Your verse was also presented well, with the weakness of your structure, yet I never lost the flow. Vote-M.M...I really think that he just barely got this. Both verses were wonderful to read, but in the end, after reading the verses about 3 times, M.M had the better verse. Good shit fellas.
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11-22-03, 01:46 PM | #9 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 4CED 5148
wow this was hard...seriously, i honestly thought you came almost dead even. but ... i dont know.
a2z, flowed and rhymed perfect...nice imagery, and let off steam...like u said everything needed to be said mm- good drop. again flowed and rhymed. vivid imagery...so i guess i just barely slightly enjoyed mm more. so this vote will go to him
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11-22-03, 03:03 PM | #10 | ||||||
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IP: 9B6A 1F1E
props to both..both ya'll showed your talent...
a2z-feeling ya flow most def..stood out a mile...quality of story was good and your scheme/route jus led a good path for a good conclusion,,rating=8.5 MM-a2z flow was better but you did have a better overall verse..the story/topic was well executed n you delivered beyond my expectations...you def showed your worth/rep here....rating=9 make sure to check my match up pz |
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11-22-03, 04:23 PM | #11 | |||||||
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IP: 6588 491C
thanx for the votes, good drop A2Z...
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11-22-03, 06:22 PM | #12 | ||||||
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IP: 02B3 389F
ah you fucking hoes..
both of you came exceptionally well here.. and i applaud both of your performances. i just wish that one of wouldve half assed it so the vote wouldnt be as hard... but i think that M~M's first line was what forced me to decide in his favor. it was a beautifully said line that grabbed my attention.. vote- m~m |
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11-24-03, 07:24 PM | #13 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
Mystery~murdera (4-1)
a2z (2-1)
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