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11-16-03, 07:05 PM | #1 | |||||||
Jee-You Knit?
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27. T-Square (1-3) vs. 28. Lethargic (0-0)
IP: 97D0 777A
Check-In's Due: Wednesday
Verses Due: Friday Votes Due: Sunday No Biting, Recycling, D/Ring. If you do, you will be banned from this league and possibly the site. Be sure to vote on at least 3 battles, and posts links in this thread. For each battle you don't vote in, you will have that many votes subtracted Your topic: open sesame
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Better- Throw Back .Compton Records. .Vicious Determination. "There are times when silence has the loudest voice" - Mike Bibby The First Ever Middle Weight Champion |
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11-17-03, 09:57 AM | #2 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 9DAE 3ADA
In...Promise Not To Forget This Time, heh.
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11-19-03, 09:03 PM | #3 | ||||||
Guest
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IP: CFA3 9A49
In......
I will vote,open sesamie., seeds now, eh |
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11-22-03, 01:12 AM | #4 | ||||||
Guest
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IP: 4577 CD9A
I dont rap about seeds, thats not my steez,
But on the streets I can see about fourty thieves/ Then I hear screams and the gang wont leave/ Untill all fourty enter 'the cave' like open sesamie/ It shoulda never happened the pyramids of the city/ Provided cover for the virginity stolen fourty times, for whom I pitty/ Gang bang its a damn shame chivalry is deceased/ But when the legend was told the Original theives raped and killed like beasts/ Open sesamie and the destiny is legs instead of doorways/ Given STD's buy at least three after stealing third base/ Goes on living going vilage to town constantly spreading/ Her on knees or opening the V you can see the Crab Breading/ And its still seen but the oral sex is still claimed with payment/ To the open sores and discolores explain what the pain ment/ The Trojan horse cant stop fourty thieves but can the disease/ Your gettin dogged dirty livin with flea's herpies, and HIV/ All because you yelled for someone to open sesamie// Finished//// |
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11-22-03, 09:33 PM | #5 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: CFDC B306
I've got 15 minutes to type this...sorry. I promised I wouldn't no show though.
One minute she's filled with laughter That I've sought after.. since her birth flipped my world.. upside down..and brought this bastard to his knees, in tears for my baby she's so beautiful in every way... And has an unrelenting hate for me But Lately.. She doesn't even have a finger to wave at me Cuz I broke her heart.. When I made a vow, to protect my child And I'm the one that broke it apart.. From the start I knew... it's dangerous for me to hold her.. Diseases are no excuse...the fact that I'm bi-polar Has no bearing on the wrong i gave.. To my innocent daughter..kin and underage Now there's nothing but a stone heart.. Thrown with cold shoulders...frozen And emotional barriers that'll never be broke open Only hopin...that I can at least see her grow..then Maybe one day...she could commence the spoken words...that have been dead for so long Years Gone...and I can't find the password To open the tomb.. She's created to block this bastard... |
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11-22-03, 10:14 PM | #6 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: CFDC B306
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92319
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92328 Only had time for 2...rest of time has been spent runnin around packin and now runnin out the door. Pz...sorry, subtract one vote |
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11-24-03, 07:15 PM | #7 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
hmmm very interesting pieces between both of you....its sad no one voted for you all...no worries i will do you good justice...
T-square i enjoyed your piece...kept your structure straight and your flow was good..couple parts i felt ruined the mood but overall decent piece... Lethargic...i really enjoyed your piece thought it was forsure the winner..very much in depth and honestly you stayed on topic beautifully... vote=lethargic...
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