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Votes Due: Sunday

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Your topic: game pieces

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In...

Sands a hoe............well i'ma drop sumin anyway

strictly for your enjoyment........

I'm not really feelin the topic.....
But seein as sands ho-showing it doesnt matterif i stay on topic
Does it?........meh

I awaken with a yawn, Four hours past Dawn..
On my thoughts, it Dawn I'm somwhere i didn't Belong..
I'm locked in a cage of my bad Activity's..
Solitary mind got me locked in my own Capitivty..
Can i break free & return to the Streets..
Do it how its did there, With the burn of the Heat..
Kill my demons, When they walking in my Sleep..
There's a war in my mind, There's no Peace when I Sleep..
I battle without fear in my dreams every Night..
Instead with Pride like an African Rebel in his Fight..
Will I die like Pablo Escobar from anothers man Envy..
His jealousy & him not liking his life wanting to be Me..
I want to be freed to my homeland like Nelson Mandela..
Lead a revoultion like Martin or Malcom X, a Black Rebel......

.....blah

... Wow, just...WOW, you should have waited until the deadline before you did that.

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Well every1's bein kinda sleepy

but can i get some feed on this.........

Pz.

sorry for the no show-

deep verse - insiteful- nice vocab-

but last line dont flow joe.....lol

good piece bra. i liked it