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12-08-03, 06:44 PM | #1 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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9.Thrust (4-2) vs 10. Dezyir (2-0)
IP: CB2E 7CE0
Topic: Converted Lifestyle
Due Date: dec 12th Voting ends: dec 15th
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SOFT FOCUS crew record (3-0) Wits end ~ DOI ~ Central....now who's next? sacred scriptures record (5-0) Last edited by deacon : 12-08-03 at 07:03 PM. |
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12-08-03, 06:46 PM | #2 | ||||||
wanna play doctor????????
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The wiseman man once said...
"The man who checks in 1st always wins" CHECK! The Wisest Man of them all once said... "Whoever posts after Kerr eats shit and dies" Last edited by Thrust : 12-08-03 at 06:50 PM. |
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12-08-03, 06:46 PM | #3 | ||||||
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A wiser man once said...
"Fuck You Kerr" check. |
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12-08-03, 06:49 PM | #4 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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^^^hahahha boo
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SOFT FOCUS crew record (3-0) Wits end ~ DOI ~ Central....now who's next? sacred scriptures record (5-0) |
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12-08-03, 06:51 PM | #5 | ||||||
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lol...nice try with the edit, but like year long tans..
you remain sunned. Last edited by Dez : 12-08-03 at 06:54 PM. |
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12-12-03, 10:14 PM | #6 | ||||||
wanna play doctor????????
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IP: EEE7 9777
Suburban area, Precicely paved streets
Million dollar mansions, Luxury sweets Wealthy people keeping to theirselves Only trouble aroused was sewage breakdowns On the outskirts of the city, Where i matured Play in playgrounds, Participated in sports Brought home decent grades, Contained my behavior I went to a christian school, "Jesus my Lord and Savior" Over n over it consumed my mind Therefor whenever in trouble, There's light in sight But the nights, so dark, so cold It's a knife instead of a gun i behold I moved into the most dangerour part of town Where jumpoffs, shootings, and robberies broke out Walking alone is scarce, I tremble in fear Conqour my fear? how... when family is killed each year A school boy, I thought deeply within Not frantic anymore...If I converted to 1 of them My knife shined bright, No sight of blood Never needed or used it, Forever layed under the rug The situation comes, Sinful actions began Stole neckalces, And countless diamonds I scared them, Damn i fealt strong They were like me, Baring to hold on All n all my agressive style caught up I was in rehab for consumin random drugs Served house arrest for dishing them about My mother just cussed...and threw me out I was in a feeble stage, Psyco prone Nobody will grant a hand, I'll do it on my own Ma gon' get it, I flashed my gun... I usta be a kid...But now i'm on the run |
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12-13-03, 04:09 AM | #7 | ||||||
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**keeeyed cuz its a friday and i was out*
i used to wait for the moment to live..now i live for the moment my moment hasnt already passed.. i just chose to postpone it craving vengeance against myself..hating what i had become shadow boxing with my shadow..but it beat me to the punch compassion? i had some..painting perfect pixels out of anger just because i cant believe..that i EVER called Jesus my savior the man was nothing, and i chose to foolishy follow his falacies fuck 'What Would Jesus Do', ive decided to adopt my own policy Father promised me, 'the path to heaven is through the bible' yeah? well there was a detour..where am i going? Hell if i know victory pose for this ex-devout Christian and his depleting faith yes. there is a God..but its hard to know which religion is true.. when false prophets and Sons are laced. turn the page in the book of my life..itll be what i make it.. Signed: Daniel Perrigo....Hardcore Christian turned soon-to-be athiest |
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12-14-03, 05:14 PM | #8 | ||||||
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votes?
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12-15-03, 04:44 AM | #9 | ||||||
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Thrust..vote on every battle with me tomorrow so some people will vote on this one.
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12-15-03, 01:12 PM | #10 | ||||||
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No contest in my eyes
thrust came way to basic in his rhyme sceme (some didn't rhyme or flow and all) and with the plot he laid out the images throughout the entire piece dez came poetic and complex and made it extra clear in the last bar just in case, good flow and wordplay average take on the topic, but you made it work with the content 'craving vengeance against myself..hating what i had become shadow boxing with my shadow..but it beat me to the punch' ^dopeness Vote - Dez |
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12-15-03, 07:37 PM | #11 | ||||||
wanna play doctor????????
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IP: EEE7 9777
i don't really know why you are hating on it so bad...
i mean...is it cuz i use short lines?... they don't hafta be longer look at Aus n Sureal... they all use short lines but... votes |
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12-15-03, 08:00 PM | #12 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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Thrust..you came dope, using nice lines and a nice view of seeing your piece. You had alot of the shit I expected to be in a piece. Same with Dez, so basically I have to give this to more creativity, and I think Dez edged it out. He used some nice metaphors as did Thrust, but when it came to creativity, Dez won to me.
Vote-Dez
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12-15-03, 08:18 PM | #13 | ||||
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Wow..
Thrust.. you came ight actually.. nothing real special but you came nice none the less.. still improving which is good to see.. didn't really hook me into the story, n' you coulda been more complex with it. Dez.. this shit was sick.. got me hooked within the first 2 lines of your shit.. really really nice piece for being a keystyle.. v/ Dez |
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12-16-03, 06:48 AM | #14 | ||||||
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Wow Dez got this wasnt really much a of a contest even when u keyed it wow Good use om multies metas and had the best creativity in this battle
Thrust you alsoo had a good verse but it lacked the creativity that Dez had srry but ima go wit Dez on this one hit my SS one up plzz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97356 |
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