Battle Rules:
10 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
due 30 mins

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-02-04 at 05:54 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

JoeyDrugsta has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 05:24 PM.

ALpHa X has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 05:28 PM.

This bitch and his WACK RHYMES are HARMLESS like when Jim Carey RIPS-OFF-HIS-MASK/
Cause this DICKRIDER’S SHIT is only SICK when he has a DICK-UP-HIS-ASS/
My shit is SICKER than PNEMONIA, you style is MORE FAKE than CUBIC -ZARCONIA/
Face it, bitch! You the BIGGEST JOKE since ARNOLD became GOVERNOR OF -CALIFORNIA/
Everyone Knew X would KILL YOU before you even started to FLING-A-WORD/
Cause Joey BEATING ME will NEVER FLY like a WING-LESS BIRD/
This lil’ DICK can’t FUCK WIT’ ME, like I’m a CONDOM WITH A HOLE-IN-IT/
Cause adding a JOYSTICK to your TOILET is the only way you be CONTROLLIN’ SHIT!!!/
This verse done FILLED YOU WITH SPOTS (bulletholes) FASTER than 100 SPEEDING CHEETAHS/
Cause even If I rolled with PREGNAUNT WOMEN, you STILL Couldn’t DE-FETUS(Defeat us)/

Alpha X, imma leave you in check
imma put you in the dirt with my footprint on yer chest
you aint the best, never have, never will
yer rhymes so dull, i'd pick a butter knife to kill
don't get cheap thrill each time you get raped by my rhyme spree
dont steal my lines while i'm away on a crime spree
you need to get some talent before you try to throw down
i seen my boys roll down more then you in weed-a pound
lets take another round, bitch take another listen
after this battle, yer cheeks gonna glisten
crying so much after i blow yer rhymes away
you remind me of the rain, just come back another day
yer best bet is to pray to yer whole family
to late tho, my rhymes ate them up, aint tho so cannibly?
how can it be that i can kick yer ass and still live in the burbs?
bitch i've had a tougher time puttin down herbs
in fact, imma smoke you, just like i did i bud
yer rhymes are neglected, need to show them more love
they either that or retarded, kinda like yer face
thas it, yer done, now go home you fuckin disgrace

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Alpha X, imma leave you in check
imma put you in the dirt with my footprint on yer chest
you aint the best, never have, never will
yer rhymes so dull, i'd pick a butter knife to kill
don't get cheap thrill each time you get raped by my rhyme spree
dont steal my lines while i'm away on a crime spree
you need to get some talent before you try to throw down
i seen my boys roll down more then you in weed-a pound
lets take another round, bitch take another listen
after this battle, yer cheeks gonna glisten
crying so much after i blow yer rhymes away
you remind me of the rain, just come back another day
yer best bet is to pray to yer whole family
to late tho, my rhymes ate them up, aint tho so cannibly?
how can it be that i can kick yer ass and still live in the burbs?
bitch i've had a tougher time puttin down herbs
in fact, imma smoke you, just like i did i bud
yer rhymes are neglected, need to show them more love
they either that or retarded, kinda like yer face
thas it, yer done, now go home you fuckin disgrace

uppppppppppiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnn...................... ..........

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Voted For: JoeyDrugsta

...aight... i dont think i have to say it but this was a wack battle.. no hate to either of ya but it was...

aight but imma vote any way...

this is the way i saw this one

Joey- your shit was ok... decent flow, ok punches and personals and it all fit in with your structure... i liked the structure, lines were not stretched and were about the same length for the most part. over all about a 5/10 drop... not the best but not bad.... ya best line was:

you aint the best, never have, never will
yer rhymes so dull, i'd pick a butter knife to kill


AlphaX- ya shit was ok also but it was off... for starters the structure was very very off and ya lines were way to stretched... i hate the random capitalized wordz... some of your punches and personals hit fairly well but you kinda rambled and didnt make much sence... no hate brotha... 3/10.. u need to elevate hommie before you battle again, there are some good threads around the site for elevation

overall this was a wack battle but my vote goes to joey... and like i said no hate to either of you... ya both brought ya shit to tha fullest and i respect that... ya both need to elevate tho and like i said, there are a lot of places around rv that you can elevate... a lot of people willing to help too... so any way stay up and just keep elevatin both of ya!

VOTE-JOEY

ELEVATE!!!!! CANT SAY THAT ENOUGH...ELEVATE

Voted For: JoeyDrugsta

Alright this was a basic newb battle...Joey you mispelled so many words it was hard to understand your drop...X basic rhyme scheme and shitty punches

V/Joey
Reason:better punches, when understandable...better structure....and better flow

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forgot to add...return honest votes to my battles...preferrably the one against Khaos so i can get it closed

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Voted For: JoeyDrugsta

well
JoeyDrugsta -
was very long but had punches struture bit of flow punches came weak but hit had a little bit of a flow der wasnt to good rhymes were ok it was alright verse hadf pucnhes flow n stuff was all good

ALpHa X -
was wack hadly no punches no strture no flow man ur verse was wack it was fucked up from head to toe dude u dont belong here HERB u struture sucks ur verse sucked not 99% 100% no dout bout that nd if u get 1 vote then who ever voted u is a alis or a fuck TWAT ass HERB

v/ JoeyDrugsta

checking your shit man........ please accept my battle now ok

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'Till Death

Voted For: ALpHa X

man waatta funny shit line hahahah gud rhymes alpha x u had sm gud flow goin onnn,, ,gud structure and sum awesome punchezzz man joey u wrk on elevation////////////
This lil’ DICK can’t FUCK WIT’ ME, like I’m a CONDOM WITH A HOLE-IN-IT/
Cause adding a JOYSTICK to your TOILET is the only way you be CONTROLLIN’ SHIT!!!/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^66 awesome and funny line ahahahha

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watta wak vrse by joey

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