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Old 06-04-07, 02:10 PM   #1
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don cardy vs. juelz santana

IP: 44FD 6166

can i compete with the best?

[juelz santana- i am crack]
Too dope for this, but you won't admit/
So my tool smoke and spit, make you choke on spit/
You ever seen a man gagged and goggle/
Sound like a newborn tryna ask for bottle/
They like cut it out you slackin, But I bust it out in rappin/
Can you name a nigga better without me bustin out and laughin?/
Nigga you couldn't spit enough to get at me/
I'll stretch you for extracirricular activities/
Forget hollerin for help/
I'll make you wanna pull your lip over your head and just swallow yourself/
You're not on my level, you're not on my shelf/
But you can and you will be just another notch on my belt/
I'm more 'mazing than Grace is when I say shit/
You should say 'Amen' after my name, kid/
Yes, this is that of greatness/
You should say 'Amen' after this statement/


[don cardy- i am crack]
can you believe this, fake jesus?, got me goin!/
you aint god but i'll leave you holyer than suday mornin'/
actually, your a casualty, in all reality/
i'm fire, raps on a heat diet, your just another calorie/
gettin' burned off/
ur music's like me watchin' ya girlfriend strip,... gettin' turned off/
but like renovation i'll still break down here walls/
scared to fight, i'll have your dodgin' the ring like you was screenin' calls/
as far as control, if heats all you good at/
than i'm the one who gives you power like the thermastat/
i move cash flow and got cash from the flow/
you need me joe, cuz i produce greens like miracle grow/
i'll get'cha chicken hotter than the kernal/
nuccas mad cuz i got a flow tighter than jim jones' thermals/
and the fact i could get more of you fruits punched than ocean spray/
and make y'all later males than a postal delay/

stamped.
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y'all ball, i just sign lines and let the words play/
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Old 06-04-07, 02:51 PM   #2
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so far..reading these "battles" seems like wen u battle lil wayne u use his style
n so on...
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Old 06-04-07, 02:54 PM   #3
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yeah, i'm using there styles against them flowin' to the beat of the song posted. cuz even if i dont measure up yet, i wanted to atleast try and see how close i was to the best so that i can keep on improving.
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Old 06-04-07, 02:56 PM   #4
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word, just seeing if u were doig that on purpose..or if it was just a bad habit...but u should try and create your on style..that way people wont be sayin ur biting there style...cuz that just gives them more ammo towards u...

for instance:

lloyd banks stole fabolous style..ya no...just sayin
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Old 06-04-07, 02:58 PM   #5
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oh yeah i know what'chu sayin'. thanks for the advise, i'm about to post a round 2 where i use my own flow and just battle them then if thats what'chall wanna see.
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Old 06-04-07, 03:45 PM   #6
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I like this drop man... keep elevating.. Ya dig?
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Old 06-04-07, 04:52 PM   #7
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good to see you elevatin don... keep it going
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Old 06-04-07, 10:11 PM   #8
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thanks for the feedback. i'm just tryna learn from all of the mistakes i made when i first got here, like when i used to parenthesize everything and flow all unevenly. thanks for the constructive critism y'all gave me back then too that enabled me to step it up.
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