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04-29-03, 10:11 PM | #1 | ||||||
KenShin
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Words to inspire
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sorry if this wack i aint wrote a poem in awhile....
im more of a battlin cat...but im try sumthin diff hope u enjoy... It's so sad that the future is a thing of the past// but i brag, on how glad, i can see tomorrow// i lost my closes freinds, but i still keep there sorrow// i borrow, hope from sunny skies// they provide, me with comfort of lasting bright tides// i rise, from the lowest occasions in my life// a exploding sight of knowing whats right// and whats wrong, keep me alive, with my body left un-harm// word is bond, how long will i feel fond, to these things of charm// my arms, wrapp around money as if it was air itself// once you rich, what the fuck is envy and wealth// Death is the son of the dark black shadows// enlighten minds know it as the 6th parrell// life fill in a water barrow// pouring hope, retracts oblivion, love support you wit hope of living// souls different, but the same concepts, you the only thing thats missing from contacts// to see, honesty n complex comments......blahhhhhh...yea
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04-29-03, 10:16 PM | #2 | |||||||
WarLord
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Nie drop and felt the emotions in this piece fosho
like this part my arms, wrapp around money as if it was air itself// once you rich, what the fuck is envy and wealth// ^^^ so tru.................lol
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04-29-03, 10:56 PM | #3 | ||||||
KenShin
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IP: ED96 6894
appreciate the feedback dun.....Uppin for more
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04-30-03, 01:16 AM | #4 | |||||||
Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
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Excellent way of forming your stream of conciousness into words. Question, where these well formulated words of yours actually a message to inspire? As in the person, inspire?
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04-30-03, 09:50 AM | #5 | ||||||
KenShin
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IP: ED96 6894
yea...to my homegurl...she lost a freind n the whole family...so i tryied to do sumthin for her....probaly wasnt much...but i did the best i could....
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