ayo i posted this on anotha site but i wanna no what ya'll think 1-10 rate

ayo ayo
24 left, until my death, only 24 til i hit tha floor, I'd fuck up everyone who's
had beef wit me in tha past, it'll take me a while since i got mad headz ta blast
I'd call up my boy and tell him ta meet me unda tha bridge on 60th Street, tell
him ta bring alla
tha heat, cause we got buisness to meet, when i got dere my he was
standin on tha corner, jus smokin', I said listen b "I've got 24 Hours ta live
and i aint fuckin jokin'"..of course we broke some a tha laws, and befo' we
knew it tha state troopers, began ta follow, I wanted ta do 1000 things at once
but he said "thats too much for you ta swallow", lets jus hit em wit tha
hollow, I said bet! lets show these motha fuckas some G, held tha piece to his
head, and counted 1,2,3, i said ya ass is toast, and oh yea my bad adios! (gunshot)

Tha'd be fun to do in my last 24 lol

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that wuz wack son...your word usage wasn't no good..didn't rhyme that much...but stay up...1