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Old 04-17-03, 04:29 AM   #1
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i was bored so i keyed dis in a few minutes.....

IP: FBDB 80E8

i got to be da hottest thing livin u heard me right/
i spit flames in da form of liquid it burn all night/
yall learn i write my rhymes make yall turn in fright/
yall lines cant reach so yall herbs cant fight/
my verbs dey bite like menus get u served all nite/
and last words from wat i heard was dude his words is tight/
im actually posed to swerve so yall dogs can hike/
yall pussies i see yall thongs so please gurls dont gripe/
my pearls u like my wisdom be conformed from light/
and my thoughts be inscribed in temples for all sorts of types/
i spit for da thugs and gangstas wat yall thought i might/
im from da street so i bust all yall dodge da site/
call me lucky i never got popped but i lodge da pipe/
right in yo mouth watch da spark and yo heart ignite/
its hard to see yo sight regard dat my flaws is slight/
and yall brauds dey givin me da draws tonite/
muthafucka.................
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Old 04-17-03, 06:51 PM   #2
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damn uppin
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Old 04-17-03, 07:26 PM   #3
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you said ya'll to much.. I couldn't really feel a flow to it.. and work on vocab.. OoNnEe
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Old 04-17-03, 11:50 PM   #4
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people have they own style...and vocab aint everything^^just statin my opinion...nice piece cuz..i can tell this is made for a audio..
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