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Old 05-25-07, 01:13 PM   #1
Black Dragon
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1st Verse - nasty as fuck........da flow wuz nice when u were doin that quick tongue shit in the beginnin.....delivery is mean as fuck....nice verse

Hook - feelin this shit......gets da point across.....

2nd Verse - flow is on point.......da delivery is strate as hell.....i like how ya ridin the beat.....u makin da gun noise like Ice Cube does..which sounds sick...

3rd Verse - yea ya delivery on this ain't there......rhymin 'ine' and the way you said it is mad annoyin......ya verse is messin up this track......

Overall - It wuz hot just take out da last verse.......

pz

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