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09-15-04, 06:18 PM | #1 | ||||
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Feel My Brain
IP: 03AF 5452
Yo in this world people seem to over look, and what they over look i put in my rhyme book, cause its my world on my own time, its my brain my thoughts and its all put in rhyme, its me but most of all its mine, if you touch it you freeze, same wit this keystyle touch the screen please!, and try to feel my power, get the shivers and take a hot shower, you got to its the way of my brain, my world is my rhyme book read it and refrain from seein it, im too dope i cant refrain from bein it, i guess its in my blood so i have to come to terms with it, i write constantly to try to get gooder, so i can shove it down haters throughts like a booger, and i wont stop untill it makes them insane, cause if your a real mcee you can Feel My Brain. |
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09-15-04, 06:28 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
i thought this was real good until i got to the last four lines, lol, i think you could have used better words then those, but whatever, its your style, and i liked the rest of it, it seemed mor elike a song, nice flow.............1
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09-26-04, 10:15 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 4575 1BDA
That Was Good Im Feelin
Dat
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10-10-04, 10:48 PM | #8 | ||||
New to RB
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IP: 7438 401E
i didnt quite get the idea of it but i guess that could be a good thing
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help me, tear down my reason help me, the sex i can smell help me , the only thing that works for me help me get away from my self i wanna f*&k you like an animal i wanna feel you from the inside i wanna f*&k you like an animal! my whole existance is flawed you get me closer to god "I think all song that have any f word in them should never be played on the radios" <--- my mom (at a town meeting i must add) LOOK he is crushing his head |
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