deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
30 line max. total not for each person

__________________
win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

blah. again. check, good luck, and lets keep it to 20 lines.

__________________

RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

wow howd you manage to get champ check in anyways

__________________

^ good question. maybe it was KOing your ass a couple weeks back that did it? now a better question is why are you trying to beef with someone in your crew?

__________________

RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

i have no response but to merk you when i drop... oh and dirtboy sorry bout the free post

__________________

rootin for `tallic

__________________

Chea.

Here.

Fuck both of you.

__________________

I click keys to hit knees an buckle fags when i belt these
Ya feel me? I got it locked.. with your skeletons.. an my key
Try me.. this like the Holy Trinity of battles, an i`ll explain
I ghost for Shadow an Son accomp.. so Father`s my real name
All fun an games.. i hate to split these two apart for starters
They`re shoppin` for talent.. an talent tops their list to barter
I`m creatin` Martyrs.. cos these two bitches die for their beliefs
Believed they could equal me.. now two on one still has them beneath
Fucka three-some.. good grief.. i`ll let the hoes scrap for seconds
Exhausted in a minute.. chances are grave cos thas what beckons
A chance? You reckon? Well i take both chances an fuckin` wreck `em
Shadow saw the match-up.. an invited accomp to collab with him
Gettin` this far`s an accomplishment on it`s own.. but now ya finished
Got within` reach of the title.. but thas all you accomplished
Kid`s dished..
Yeah right..
You`ll probably use the same excuse explainin` the b/s verse ya write
Turn back to son the darkness.. S.E`s a bitch cos he`ll always Miss
Nothin` but limp wrists.. punchin? You couldn`t even make a fist
You`d think this is the lunch line the way you gettin` served punch lines
Two days to burn me.. don`t bother.. cos you could never match mine.

__________________

I elevate… y’all just hate… bitches.

Not just easy, this wins satisfying, through n through
I mean the only downside to this battle is… well, you two
I’m the clear winner, these bitches quiver, I never fail to deliver
I’ll be laughing all the way to the bank… n drop two in the river
Everyone’s sick of accomp, drunk running his mouth
They all leavin…shit, even ya records heading south
So winning this battle’s no acco… well actually never mind
I think I’ll let you drop the played accomplishment lines
DV made me text leader, n you soar… that’s just how life goes
… but battleing Dirtboy!? Clear shows, a’s just hit new lows.
And illtalic’s in denial, I thought you was good all this while
But shit…
Couldn’t even get a vote when I merked you with your own style
Kid’s a history geek, its clear… where he go, bitches is never near
Honestly Abe, your sex life is just “Four score n seven years”
You bitches worth my best 1-2? Nah, you know the truth…
Is slash that, I bring ½ and still fucking beat you
I bring truth to pen is mightier than the sword
… when each of my keys is really hitting your spinal chord
Ghostwrite lines in your blood n leave your ass for dead
Kid don’t dread… at least now your verses actually well red

__________________

RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

Shit fuck dis rankin system accom got in this battle the cheap way
you could've one this battle but you overpaid for them shit ass verses on ebay
and s.e. your punches suck they flunk when the shits cruchtime
what i'm wonderin hows there a shadows edge when there aint no sunshine
casual takes beatin daily why that why its fortunate that his s.n. reflects
shit was ittalic till i knocked his verse off dis site and slanted from da right to da left
you see a good future cuz both you fuckers starin through a refracted lense
cuz s.e. diss my record when your total battles couldn't touch my wins
-casual friday- is tommrow so right now verses due so it is your time to die
when i own this whole week and merk bitches in days that end in -Y-
theese fags couldn't punch they way outa wet paper bag so how they takin action
-i love- to kick the shit out theese bitches so call dis verse a -fatal attraction-
and according to most beef wit me aint somthin you beggin for or somthin you want
so s.e. say he aint on dicks.. shit bitch you stole natives structre and font
-bang bang your dead-kid have fun playin wit cork guns and gats wit plastic caps
when theese two bitches could pull out pairs of a.k.s and not shoot a game of craps
reverse words and put theese bitches to sleep whent hey meet my wesson and smith
shit your keys droppin quickly like i found dat bitch alicia and kicked her offa cliff
you bitches act like dem checks yo ass can't cash and get out and just bonce
and i'm da last in this line but you gotta be on my level to even have your verse count

__________________

Alright.....first to vote....

Accomp.....I don't know what happened to you man. Your verse was way too stretched and your punches were kinda played/weak. So obviously, you didn't get my vote......

Now Casual and Shadow came pretty hard against each other. I didn't like Casual's opener. It was basically just meaningless multis. You can't have a filler for an opener. I like how Shadow's opener was a diss to the both of them, it set the tone for the rest of the battle. Casuals punches didn't seem to hit that hard and I didn't like the way he used the quote. Quotes are fine, yours just seemed pointless. Shadow had a couple really good punches and a lot less filler than Casual. Both flowed well, but I think that Shadow took this one.......

Good job to all!!!

Vote - Shadows Edge

__________________

loool
Accomp didnt have a chance oh hell in this battle.
lol
It was just between Illtalic and Shadow's edge.
and I personally think Shadow got this.
he came more witty.
and thats the only reason he won.
good battle shadow's edge and illtalic.
and that other guy, that was here...

__________________

yep... nice battle.

__________________

RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

breakdown for casual:

flow:good job probably the best out of the three here 7.5/10

volcab:alright use better then the average of the league 7/10

punches:alot of lines i'll give that nothing overly strong or new though 6/10

overall:20.5/30

breakdown for shadow edge:

flow:no problems here shows why you guys are on top of the league 7/10

volcabretty basic stuff i've seen better from you here before 6/10

punches:some alright lines agaisnt casual but the ones against accomplishment are the same it seems everyone uses nothing new or orginal there my fav line,"Ghostwrite lines in your blood n leave your ass for deadKid don’t dread… at least now your verses actually well red" good closer i thought 6.5/10

overall:19.5/30

breakdown for accomplishment:

flow:the bars were streched real bad without any kind of internal structure to help it out not good 5/10

volcabretty basic array not really showing that you should be here 5/10

punches:mainly played ideas but you had quite a few of them so you get points for that 5.5/10

overall:15.5/30 expected more from you here

vote--overall pretty good battle i thought casual got it though

__________________
win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league