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11-14-06, 09:41 PM
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"Nobody"
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Every read ELEMENTALITIES poem called "Opinions" and you'll know why I wrote this one........
Who am I ? One single person One in one One single person One in a million One single person One in six billion One single person One too many Who am I? Nobody
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11-15-06, 04:02 AM
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I must interupt your "opinion" on this one and say that who we are as a whole is on the contrary to nobody - we are everbody... we are all waves in a vast ocean. It only has the illusory appearance that we are separate, but the truth is that we are inextricably connected.
Who you are not is the objects of your experience. Who you are or who I am is a holographic expression of the entire universe which is manifesting as a continuum of probability amplitudes for space-time events in a field of infinite possibilities. But then again... this is just another opinion. You will have to decide on your own.
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11-15-06, 07:08 AM
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*truth* Im mainly getting at teh fact that too many people try to fit in and that who we are as an idividual doesnt matter so much as we always try to be what everybody wants...
when we become ourselves, is when the world is no llonger made up of six billion people... but, of six billion idividuals.... yes, to say "nobody" is a strong word, but it isnt used in the context of being "unimportant", its trynna compare the world as a whole, to one person... everybody tries to fit in... and when u try too hard, u become nothing but a shadow of urself.... "nobody" can be replaced with any word, any phrase as anybody sees fit.... it can go to any mood, story, feeling or situation.... but yes, you do make sense, thansk
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11-15-06, 12:26 PM
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This makes alot of sense too, and I agree... theresfore who we are is a dichotomy(:
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12-14-06, 02:09 PM
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Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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^^^oooh v.intelligent arguments goin on up there. But i'll leave aside the actual topic of nobody and somebody and comment as i see fit. I enjoyed reading this poem. It's abstract yet it makes sense. It's a poem i can fully empathise with at times and contains a lot of truth in it. I appreciate the structure and simplicity of form, its refreshing. I been on this board a while n left for a while, its good to come back and see that there are real poetry heads in here now, who seem to know what they're talking about. good stuff. I look forward to reading more...
if u could, would u plz RTF on mine. thanks.
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