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11-08-05, 11:01 PM

#76

Zone Out

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lol @ the Apexx dick ridin

the beat sounds dope so far
OH NEVER FUCKIN MIND!

You sound funny, like..ionno, not bad funny, and not haha funny, but, like..ionno.

1st verse
nice, hype delivery
the beat wears on me after a while
so its gettin dope

chorus
aiigh, I guess

verse 2
more punchlines, but your flow messes up 2 times I counted.

the lyrics is mad simple
the rhyme scheme is mad simple
but overall is decent its a "dead banga" as you put it.
kind of short.
we should do a remix to this shit. holla at me
this feedback is for the RG
Return the favor of my track
diamond in the rough

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Originally Posted by strobe

If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious

11-09-05, 02:31 PM

#77

B To The D

Nt Your Average

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WOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOLY SHIT WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

FLOW DOPE DOPE DOPE 9/10

DELIVERY-PERFECT-11/10

PRESENCE-REAL NICE-9/10

WOOOOOOOOOO WOOOOOOOOOOO

I Like The Hook -_- Its Simple But Affective

Dope Club Banger

*Puts On Mp3 Player*

DOPE

OVERALL 9/10

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11-09-05, 02:39 PM

#78

Sik Wit It

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Haha, was feelin this track mayn.. Was feelin tha beat & lyrics. Overall keep it up wit this shit though.

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11-09-05, 07:57 PM

#79

K.ontroverz.Y

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Originally Posted by Sik Wit It

Haha, was feelin this track mayn.. Was feelin tha beat & lyrics. Overall keep it up wit this shit though.

thanks famz i appreciate the honest feedback. No doubt. And fo sho i'll keep it up. I can only get better right? but again thanks for the feedback

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Originally Posted by -U.N.F-

LOL. word homie thanks famz i appreciate it alot. Ay if you puttin it on your mp3 make sure yo homies hear it LOL. and look out for the remix its comin REAL SOON. word again thanx for the feedback

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