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Old 12-30-06, 03:10 PM   #46
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Old 12-30-06, 03:20 PM   #47
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Lyrically simple! Flow on point, not really any energy on this track. You dont have a rapping voice, you should put more anger in it. You sound kinda soft. (whoever on first verse)
Second verse, a lil better, still kinda simple. Better than the first one tho. Flow is on point also, You held the track.

Beat choice is coo, a nice diss track. This diss or whatever aint all that. Hook is kinda wack in all honestly. Ok track. Nothin I would listen to, but still coo!

You are why RV is gay.
You lack comprehension skills.
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 12-30-06, 06:12 PM   #48
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you guys cant take critism can you? If some one doesn't say its the shit then they are retarded huh? wierd logic but if it works for you guys fam. hope you sell millions like that bruh. good luck.
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Old 12-31-06, 12:16 AM   #49
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dude said it was a fuckin diss when it wasnt n YOU said for yourself you didnt understand the lines lol if your too slow to even understand the track then we'd rather u just not leave feed hehe
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Old 12-31-06, 01:21 AM   #50
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whats good with Yvonne? I aint seen her around here lately TT.
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Old 12-31-06, 01:26 AM   #51
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dunno she aint ever on aim either. i put her in time out n told her we aint fuckin no more til she gives me head. maybe that had somethin do to with it......
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Old 12-31-06, 01:30 AM   #52
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werd...sometimes thats how you have to em fam. way to take one for the team though.
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Old 12-31-06, 01:56 AM   #53
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dude said it was a fuckin diss when it wasnt n YOU said for yourself you didnt understand the lines lol if your too slow to even understand the track then we'd rather u just not leave feed hehe

Exactly..
and Im not bothered by yall's negative criticism.
The 3 people that said something negative about the track, we're better than.
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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