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Featured track sep 5-12

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word ma....simple beat did good on it.....triple n sounds a bit loud compared to yall.....might want to fix that.....this is good, you need to exute a lil more comfort on the mic tho...you sound a lil tense....good shit specially since i rarely hear shit from you.....only thing crappy bout this song is you never asked me to hop on it

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Listen'n

Feelin the beat yo good choice..

1st:Willa- Flow an presence is nice yo...like'd the way u approached it...Lyrics an concepts is on point.. vocals mixed well...emotion thoro...

HoOk: Triple touchs this nice'ly like this shit..

2nd:TonySelf- Flow is nice kid....lyrics is coo...like the concept though...emotion an presence is on point for this...

HoOk: Same

3rd:Triple- Vocals a lil loud but mixed well...like the lyrics an concepts...flow is always on point..liked how u kicked it...emotion an presence shines real nice on ur part of the verse...good shit fam

HoOk: Same

4th:Enygma- Good flow kick game man...like ur presence an emotion pretty much everyone on this joint was on point no frontin' on that kid...like ur lyrics ur concepts...only thing i can see wrong is ur main vocals is turned down lower than ur ablibs an dubs...might want to fix that an ur verse is golden...

Over-all
Enygma's verse main vocals could be turned up a lil bit.. an his dubs an libs turned down...Triple's verse is a lil loud but other than that i dont see anything wrong wit the track shit is crack to me..like the beat y'all picked...an the concepts y'all touhced on...Everybody came off proper on this joint..keep doin what y'all do feel me an keep droppin audio..my ratin 9/10 holla at yo boy 1

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Sick Period....

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This was nice everyone sounded dope, I was really feeling this.

WOW......

beat is right...

Verse1: Willa ... you been on someother shit lately.... Flow on poin, delivery... all that.. you upped your game by leaps and bounds ma... i got to give it to ya

Hook: Trip... the hook is aight... only complaint is the volume over the hook is mixed in a few DB's too loud...

Verse2: Tony... this was your layed back attack to the track... but it works fo sho... feelin it ...

Verse3: Trip... you came off on this... even though your bitch ass stole my spot on the track ... FUCKERS..... sall good

Verse4: Enygma... flow is a lot smoother over this... production seems a tad crisper... you held ya own fam...

Overall this was deff enjoyable... juss gotta adjust Trips Volume... and this joints a keeper.. nahmean... dope drops all around

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

thanks hey tito theres an extra verse if you want on it

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I"m def. feelin this beat...u need too hook me up with this shizz!!!

alright - Willa your quality has gotten like 1000 better....this sounds really good....You flow is good....so far the best femcee on this site and the best ive heard online YET! anyways....lyrics are good.......

Hook - Triple N really held it down.....the melody was crazy....sounds professional

Tony Self - I realy like you with this mellow type of flow it molded with the song really good you should have turned the vocals up a little more! but lyrics were cool good job

Hook - Same

Triple N - You overall had the best drop on this song so far........your flow and change ups def. caught my attention....on the real this sounds professional......seriously...def. somthing i'd brag too my friends about like "OH SHIT U HEARD THIS!!!!"

hook - same!

Enygma - Your flow is really melodic i'm really feelin the way you deliver ur rhymes on each song...ur lyrics are good...no complaints here man you really did ya thing

Hook - 1 more thing this is my fav. part of the track.....the way he says "MY BLOOD,SWEAT,TEARS" is just like WOAH and hits ya


Overall this a dope ass song....on the real..i'd def. be bumpin this shit in my headphones on the way too school..keep doin it up man!!

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thanks bump....

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aiight listenin'....

beat sounding dope...

willa, wow that's all I can say. you got like million times better since last time i heard you. Voice sounds like way too young tho. But as you get older shit will grow so word. but lyrics are dope. flow so fluid. this shit dope...

hook, damn lmao scared me, cuz Triple comin' in. the different in voices. loool but hook is ill

Tony vocals sound a lil bit low. But LL Cool J comin' dope. lol j/p but i like this. nice delivery, good flow. like the lyrics.... shit was coo. good shit here. I'ma get that collab don't worry. lol but nice verse yo

Trip, comin' in with that illness. Flow changes are illy as usual. dope lyrics. Delivery is tight. good emotion. like that beat stop where you clear throat or w/e.. shit was dope..

Enygma, that nygga rippin' it again. lol whats up with the effect you put on your voice? i guess you like dubbed whole verse. shit's coo tho. Just isn't your best shit you've done. But nonetheless real solid verse. good lyrics and flow.

overall, this was a tight collab, everyone held their own. Willa suprised me like whoaaaa, didn't expect that. lol improved loads. Good shit. everyone else had nice verses too. killer hook. overall dope track. good shit. 9/10

EZ

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thank you pully
:kisses:

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solid .

SOLID FUCKING TRACK.

Hook is mad right and creative. beat is very simple so all verses and hooks come off even better...no fighting the intstrumental. Willa....came off so right. flow was burning, and quality was hella good. Triple/Enygma/Tony....came off damn nice too. a lil vocal leveling needs to b done, but overall....so damn solid

keep up the hot trax

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