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Old 02-03-06, 04:49 AM   #1
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Old 02-03-06, 01:11 PM   #2
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arch the dark, lothario, sets the scenario
in a ride with a blunt, passenger sides, the hoe
strange terretories, that i cruise through with ease
but evil things be deeking Dark, peeking through the tree's
tryna creep on me? who that be? the demon family?
backdafuckup offa me, or face rest without P
im not playin, switch shit up like a super saiyan
bustin at the bushes and the demons in my brain
am i stayin sane? in trying, but sane seems to be a strain
my bullets are all blown, so im down to snake and crane
hiyaa, so hi, i'll teach you how to die
am i duelling with myself or the demons in the sky?
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Old 02-08-06, 07:07 PM   #3
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Old 02-12-06, 01:49 AM   #4
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I roll wit treez, taken where seasons guide
Ate tha applez but the reasons lied
Birds follow like angels they reign the skies
Do my best 4 tha world tho it blatantly dies
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Old 02-13-06, 07:00 PM   #5
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She's findin her mind intertwined with deep burdens,
The kind to leave her fellow man surprised if they heard em

The pain's unbearable, yet she drags her mind and soul,
Past their boundaries to escape falling in this black hole,
Back's so strained it's now at the point of breaking,
But when she tries to lose the weight gained they say she's faking,
Needlessly smearing his name through her fears,
Even though he regularly raped her for years,
Told her "no one ain't gonna listen if you speak"
And when she couldn't take it he told her she was weak
She tried to tell her mother, she said "talk to your dad"
Irony gets tricky, but this time it was bad....

She's findin her mind intertwined with deep burdens,
The kind to leave her fellow man surprised if they heard em
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Old 02-28-06, 08:00 AM   #6
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"Everybodys got barriers to break through"
"Have faith in yourself and they can't phase you"
"Barriers can't take me, Barriers can't bring me down"

The road ahead is tough, Can't sit back and relax//
Its a hard life to live, she has got to face facts
Can't cut slack; in real life, or the entrance is easily finished//
Until she's left in the dust faded, worn out , and diminished
The shine, no longer blimished, just abraised through the sands of time//
Everyone forgot she existed and eventually payed her no mind
Used to wine and dine, but now travels on a path of redemption//
Once thats drivin into your head, its not easy for life to give an extention
Give me your attention, wake up, see how her path is not clear//
The burden on her back, while her weak mind sheds a tear
Can't you hear? The sound that travels far back, in the distance//
The cry of pain and suffering without her showing any resistance//
But the instant she fails or has no faith in herself anymore//
Then shes the same as anyone that has one foot through the door
So whats in store? Barriers she must break but can't ignore//
Until the day she succeeds her goal and takes the center floor

"Everybodys got barriers to break through"
"Have faith in yourself and they can't phase you"
"Barriers can't take me, Barriers can't bring me down"
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