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fivestar general 4 44.44%
JC REAL 5 55.56%
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Old 03-09-06, 08:31 PM   #16
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Voted For: JC REAL

Returnin the vote:

Fivetstar:
Your verse was too long, had some uneccessary lines in there.
some shit had me laughin'...but overall for the amount of bars you dropped, you didnt come consistant enough, maybe should of shortend it a little...

JC:
Openener was real weak...and you didnt drop enough bars, but the few bars you had, they prolly hit more than Fives did.

It was a close one, but JC gets my vote.
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Old 03-13-06, 11:31 AM   #17
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This was feedback posted for JC REAL

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dis sucks monkey ass.....really if u cant do betta den dat quit please................weakest line
This bitch sayin hes better, he aint even close at all
just like my hockey skates, this bitch has gone dawl
too stretched........jus work on it an you will be cool.......weak punch
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Old 03-13-06, 04:00 PM   #18
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This was feedback posted for FIVESTAR GENERAL

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Your both whack as fuck


And 5 Star is a punk rock beezy!
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Old 03-16-06, 01:17 PM   #19
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Old 03-16-06, 07:51 PM   #20
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Old 03-18-06, 03:27 PM   #21
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Old 03-22-06, 05:25 PM   #22
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Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL

five star general im likin ur rhymin its tight jc real as you said ya did it in ten mins ya should have taken time not that i have much experience but im givin it to five star general yo show some love bk in all my battles i aint gettin shit all votes man not hatin mch love
 
Old 03-27-06, 11:31 PM   #23
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Voted For: JC REAL

hahaha...............
his bitch sayin hes better, he aint even close at all
just like my hockey skates, this bitch has gone dawl
My punches hit so hard it will break ur jaw
1-800-general , its his number give it a call*
^^^^^^^^^^
good punches here JC... LUV THA LINES N SHIT
had sum good flow... overall it wuz a decent verse.. compared to his shit...

u could live in a oven and still not pack heat***
dude tryed to go to fagsrus.com but landed here accidentally
sucking dick,fucking men thats wat this punk does Generally
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

lost it a bit at tha end 2 simple ..but felt it better than 5 star...... overal u had way harder punches n a better verse n good personals..

vote JC REAL...

HOLLA BK.... RETURN THA FAVOUR AIITE..... WIT A VOTE IN MI BATTLE
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Old 04-06-06, 09:40 AM   #24
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Old 04-06-06, 11:20 AM   #25
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Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL

on the realest level imaginable i think JC completely flopped in this battle. the packing heat line was played and a half, and that gay hotline ish was just unecessary...how old are you fam? the flow was ok though, although the content and wordplay was poor at best and the punches were ineffective.

now 5star i thought you were seriously lackin in punches and your flow was inconsistent in some parts. but you seemed to actually be trying to include punches sometimes. to be honest, you'd be better off having typed a shorter, harder verse, and put in all your better lines in there instead. you had the only average line in this battle

Uza pussy fam, only time u see da hood is wen look at ya moms mini-van/
Im from tha slums, nigga to me bridgewater like disneyland/

even though the most obvious thing that could have been changed is that the two lines should have been swopped to give it a 1-2 punch structure.

but yeh you came with the better verse, eventually

so v/5star
 
Old 04-06-06, 03:59 PM   #26
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Voted For: JC REAL

This bitch sayin hes better, he aint even close at all
just like my hockey skates, this bitch has gone dawl
My punches hit so hard it will break ur jaw
1-800-general , its his number give it a call*
The only thing 5 star about u is ur losing streak**
u could live in a oven and still not pack heat***
dude tryed to go to fagsrus.com but landed here accidentally
sucking dick,fucking men thats wat this punk does Generally

Vs

Sorry son im jus better then u itz evolution, natural selection/
ya only chance of beating me iz praying tha i forever lose my connection/
But even i never drop a verse da battle would still b close/
Bcuz my silence is better than da weakness of tha wack ass verse u post/

V/jc real.....this was a weak one...5star u came wit a weak verse...it dont mean nuthin if u write 20 lines...of nuthin ur punchs were played and had weaek personals wit stretched lines...jc u had a decent verse nuthin to special but u didnt have that many played out punchs..u get my vote....RTF in the Sig Honestly or this will be Removed
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Old 04-15-06, 01:19 AM   #27
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Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL

This bitch sayin hes better, he aint even close at all
just like my hockey skates, this bitch has gone dawl

WTF THAT SHIT DONT EVEN RHYME NOT TO MENTOIN ITS GARBAGE

My punches hit so hard it will break ur jaw
1-800-general , its his number give it a call*

DUDE U EITHER HAVE A FUNNY ACCENT OR U SHOULD JUST NEVER RAP,THAT SHIT DOESNT RHYME AT ALL


The only thing 5 star about u is ur losing streak**
u could live in a oven and still not pack heat***
WACK!

dude tryed to go to fagsrus.com but landed here accidentally
sucking dick,fucking men thats wat this punk does Generally

THIS IS THE CLOSEST U CAME TO A PUNCH IN THIS ENTIRE VERSE N IT WAS WEAK...



Ok you beezy dis way 2 easy check it-

So i guess we goin ta war, O well no fears/
Jc musta jus broke a mirror u ain gon win for 7 years/

I CAN STOP RIGHT HERE CUZ U ALREADY WON

Wanna talk shit in my intro an refuse to salute/
Now i gotta eat ya wordz like alphabet chicken noodle soup/

PLAYED

You a fake , not real a fuckin JC illusion/
Only way u could beat me is if we had a brain transfusion*/

EHH WEAK

an even then ya body cant contain the skillz i got/
Try an right hard as me da pressure'll crack ya wrist in 5 spots/

DOESNT RHYME

Bitch, ill kill ya life force leave u lika wilteded up flower/
Only time u drop clean bars is wen u fumble Lever 2000 in da shower/

EHH WACK

U got no text skills, look at ya record da proof is in da puddin**/
Got em sayin "i noe i cant, i noe i cant", tha little train that couldn't***/
WTF?
Nigga deez bars'll knock u back/
de-rail u send u flippin through tha air lika acrobat/

EHH AIGHT BUT I THINK I'VE HEARD THIS BEFORE

An ya city wack, but datz neither here nor there "water under da bridge"****/
Patna u from tha suburbs stop tryin ta be hard before u loose ya lid/
WEAK

Uza pussy fam, only time u see da hood is wen look at ya moms mini-van/
Im from tha slums, nigga to me bridgewater like disneyland/

....EHH

Nuthin but actors an happy people, ya town sweet lika summertime lemonade/
If ya block took to tha streets it would look like fuckin gay parade/
WEAK

Sorry son im jus better then u itz evolution, natural selection/
ya only chance of beating me iz praying tha i forever lose my connection/

EHH WEAK

But even i never drop a verse da battle would still b close/
Bcuz my silence is better than da weakness of tha wack ass verse u post/
HAHA ONLY FUNNY CUZ ITS TRUE

For bein such a bitch u do more gun talk than most/
Jus noe ill spread u out like butter, parkay over toast*****/
GAY
U spittin misses don even know i what direction ta direct ya topics ta roast/
Bcuz itz obvious dat ull never be able ta see like ima fuckin ghost/
WEAK


JC REAL DUDE I DUNNO WTF THAT VERSE WAS IT MADE ME WANNA KILL MYSELF
2ND DUDE,SOME STUFF PLAYED SOME WEAK,COUPLE OK? PUNCHES....AT LEAST IT FLOWED A LOT BETTER N THERE WAS AN ATTEMPT AT PUNCHES.......

VOTE=FIVESTAR GENERAL
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Old 04-15-06, 01:21 AM   #28
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WOW,I cant believe ANYONE voted for jc real.....unbelievable this site sucks cock
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Old 04-15-06, 08:56 PM   #29
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i agree but to each his own uppin^^^^^^
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Old 04-22-06, 09:07 PM   #30
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uppin or sum votes
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