Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No Dick Riding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-18-04 at 11:38 AM

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it's on, good luck niggs

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 11:31 AM.

accept this battle already................................

Red Bull has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 11:35 AM.

hows intensify effect supposed to get respect, when hes battle rookies instead of vets
i detect that the kids a family reject, born with a defect, noboday wants to see that

your a bitch made vermon, when you see my name your worryin, gettin nervous
i'll leave you to fry like a jew in the furnace screamin "please don't burn us"

its fantastic that you'll get your ass kicked through a keyboard thats plastic
kids fuckin drastic, only action he gets is from his avitars graffic

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Personals
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kids callin on newbs to battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...781#post1593781

avitar has an anime picture of a girl twirling her tits

my mind convinced for acepting u'r stupied heres the consequence
punch u in the cheat so hard forensic gotta dust ya spine for prints *ouch*
ya verse be soft my contines acid... u'r sick? only cuz u'r spits was produce by cough's
shit i'll dead red-bull "point-man" by cuting hes fingers off *HA*
my verse i'll have ya "not lookin to drop" like good boxser with large names
i'll put ya bars 2 ashame w/ viscious shot that'll have ya trying to "deal with faults" like "retarted card games"
u couldnt spit ill so it time u get off my nuts
plus u couldnt spit fire if ya verse was attached to a ciggertte butt's

word, solid drop....up

Voted For: intensify effect

close battle

punches- effect
personals- Red
multis- Red
metas- effect
word play- effect
flow- effect

Effect u had better punches and flow mostly. Close battle though, it coulda gone anyway.

Red u barely lost. You had the personals, and multis, but not the punches. If u had had the flow u woulda won.

Effect:
"ya verse be soft my contines acid... u'r sick? only cuz u'r spits was produce by cough's
shit i'll dead red-bull "point-man" by cuting hes fingers off " nice punch.

Red:
"hows intensify effect supposed to get respect, when hes battle rookies instead of vets
i detect that the kids a family reject, born with a defect, noboday wants to see that" nice personal.

v/effect
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word, thanks for the feed....uppin this shit for some votes

up.

up.

I can't vote, just checkin' the count on this one...

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Voted For: Red Bull

wow, this was bad from both of you, ive seen you guys do a lot better, Red Bull had this one but it was very slim

hows intensify effect supposed to get respect, when hes battle rookies instead of vets
nice opener, but not true 7/10
i detect that the kids a family reject, born with a defect, noboday wants to see that
good multis, but no punch in there really 6.5/10

your a bitch made vermon, when you see my name your worryin, gettin nervous
nice set up 8/10
i'll leave you to fry like a jew in the furnace screamin "please don't burn us"
not bad 7/10

its fantastic that you'll get your ass kicked through a keyboard thats plastic
nice set up 8/10
kids fuckin drastic, only action he gets is from his avitars graffic
8.5/10, its played line man
overall 45/60



my mind convinced for acepting u'r stupied heres the consequence
lol what??? 3/10
punch u in the cheat so hard forensic gotta dust ya spine for prints *ouch*
pretty good 7.5/10
ya verse be soft my contines acid... u'r sick? only cuz u'r spits was produce by cough's
blah 6.5/10
shit i'll dead red-bull "point-man" by cuting hes fingers off *HA*
nop, you cant rime somtin wit a *HA* thats wack man 6/10
my verse i'll have ya "not lookin to drop" like good boxser with large names
okay ur gettin there 7/10
i'll put ya bars 2 ashame w/ viscious shot that'll have ya trying to "deal with faults" like "retarted card games"
8/10 pretty good
u couldnt spit ill so it time u get off my nuts
blah to plain 6.5/10
plus u couldnt spit fire if ya verse was attached to a ciggertte butt's
nah man 6/10
Overall 49.5/80 nop that wont do it v/red bull

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