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Old 06-04-05, 01:00 AM   #16
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damn..good battle man....................
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Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
 
Old 06-04-05, 03:40 PM   #17
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You too man. Was an honor to battle ya.
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Old 06-05-05, 04:07 PM   #18
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Spoken Prophecy: I enjoyed reading your drop actually, it had a lot of common knowledge in it and you really managed to transfer a message to your readers. The emotion was a strong aspect of your piece and not so much imagery. Vocab was excellent, flow was good but your structure kinda made it hard to read though, rhymes didn't always work out either but the content of your piece was very powerful.

The Revelation: excellent piece right here, very creative as well and just the entire build up was amazing. You managed to write down a fascinating blend of imagery and emotion throughout nice vocab and with a good flow. Structure made it easy to read, especially also the division into several stages. Strongest aspect was creativity expressed by an amazing mix of raw emotion and perfect imagery. One of the best I've seen from you

No hate Spoken Prophecy but he was just too good for you this time...
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Old 06-06-05, 03:46 PM   #19
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The Revalation wins by 2 votes...
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