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11-27-05, 08:25 PM
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A Life Of Chryme
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Crazy Hades & Max McFly vs. ~Souljah~ & Critic
IP: 821E E436
 Battles up: Monday Check In: Wednesday Drop time: Friday Both members must check in. Only 1 member has to drop the verse. Rules Topic: Quiet Thunder. 16-32 Lines per member . . . . .
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11-27-05, 08:47 PM
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IP: 3881 400B
Hehe check......
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11-27-05, 09:19 PM
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Just searching.
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IP: DB41 DC69
Heh...Crazy is present.
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11-28-05, 03:25 AM
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IP: 2041 AFC0
Cool this should be dope,.. Good luck Crazy & Max.
Stay Up 1~ |
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11-28-05, 11:31 AM
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WhoAreYou?
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IP: A181 D033
check check nuccah
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12-01-05, 09:13 PM
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IP: 3881 400B
First Verse- Crazy Hades
Second Verse- Max McFly. Promenades through the vines, speaking with the divine and exchanging casual comments; Displaying cryptic messages to a ragged world while discussing a few apocalyptic comets... Through chuckles and frowns, when vines grew up or withered down, droughts plagued us... Just a new crude talent presented by the one who made us --- the flawed. He'd always hate us... On an unfair scale he'd weigh us, and spoke with persuasive Soothing Rain and Quiet Thunder. Past this facade developed by a fraud, he was a kid playing with toys, eyes bright with wonder. "This is your chance to recompense, heed and harken, do not shun this most sacred message!" The villagers ignored his words. Angrily, he shouted: "Fine, then thou shalt learn thou lesson." Followed by mutters, he passed; families drew their curtains and shutters, 'n watched the prophet. "The ground shall be tainted with heathen's blood! Thou shalt perish, thou can not ever stop it! It is his wrath; It is his command! He died for you, and his heart perished in these very process." Ramble after ramble...day after day...the village continued on his path, not heeding to his talking. Finally, one day, light returned to the prophet's eyes and he smiled at the rugged man before him; Gone was the indignant village's snoring, this man did not believe his 'anecdotes' were boring... "Noah, what is it you speak of?" The lad could not have been past the first stages of adolescence, Whom was in no way inconspicuous as he dominated the streets with his impressive presence. "Quiet Thunder and Soothing Rain! Maybe to end the drought; possibly, but I very much doubt this. He wants me to be the luminous lantern amongst the midst of those destined for The Sad Abyss. I must shed the dark...I must build my Ark. Will you join me before it's too lad, young, precious lad? Join me on this journey." But with his eyes sad, the young man shook his head and turned his back. Lightning strikes, the flashes came; the thatched rood trickled with flames, Villagers are hallucinating and sticking their burnt tongues out in the rain, Everyone has a twisted devilish grin; the prophet's looking in mass horror, Where have they been? Their faces turn red and their cheeks grew morbid, The thunder cracks, and the child’s eyes turn to black, a vision took place, All his fellow people bloody and thrashed floating in this storm-made lake, He’s standing drenched in sheep’s organs, wool and limbs sinking through the liquid, The prophet stays drenched, natural caused macabre slayings of his once loved kids, The ocean and his village merged into a catastrophe, but he sees a figure standing, Darkness covers his shadow; a surge of electricity shocks a child with godly branding, Noah the prophet appears; the child walks toward the darkness with his trembling feet, But suddenly he’s covered with gashes, slits, wounds and aching knees, The ghastly horrified child struggles through waves to reach the constructed ship, Reclined on the holy wood, splinters clenched his unworthy skin and ripped, The moment was unearthly as the H2O down poured, he recovers with haste, Rising water hits his broken vertebrae as it quickly comes to his waist, At first the day river was placid, tranquil, pacifistic! But now the devil has cried, Wept and horrendously bawled with rumbling tears, crashing upon the glittering sky! Noah examined the boy bursting “Are you a true Christian?” pummeled with grief, The battered child replied “Saving one’s life should not have to do with belief!” “You are not chosen to lead the new world! Parish in hell with your misguided taint!” The young one looks up at Noah, trembling, staring with teary eyes at the saint, He wanders off into the depths of the only thing that would save his life, Omitted by Noah himself… he took one last look at the corpses of fallen wives, The arc sailed away from the child, his expression was blank, and bitterly spoiled, As the synthetic vision passed, a flash of thunder hit his body, he fell back from the recoil…
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i'm bored. Last edited by Max McFly. : 12-01-05 at 09:46 PM. |
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12-02-05, 10:40 AM
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Black Poet
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IP: 7BC4 5A05
~Quite Thunder~ Captured from our surroundings, shots sounding Ear drums pounding, all around people are crowing Rounded us up like vermin, homes start burning Blackened smoke billowing, deaths smell churning Darkness falls suddenly, only light is the moon lit sky Black hair brown eyes, hearing family member's cry Left looking for answers, but only hate protrudes Everything else eludes reason, why'd they intrude I see the mental stain, but it's our religion we retain Forced onto a train, cloud pouring rain, cry I refrain We were taken to a secluded camp up in the mountains That smell! why is crimson flowing from the fountains This eerie feeling overwhelms me, I can't explain why It's like an uncontrollable feeling that were all going to die All around me I see emptiness, everyone's face looks bleak I'm separated from my family, tears cascaded off my cheek I'm finding it hard to speak your memory I will always keep Now I'm seeing dead people being thrown in a mass heap I walk in hast wanting to know what is going on in this camp I find myself by a building that's walls are covered in damp suddenly this quite thunder rumbles, inside I hear mumbles People stumble, chocking, screaming, & then I take a tumble I awake, for a moment I though this whole thing was a dream Thing's wasn't quite what they seem, but then I heard a scream I ran back to the camp, to find all the other prisoners in a line I should have taken it as a sign, but I guess my mind was blind The line headed back to that building, the place I had once been I haven't forgotten the voices or all the bodies I had once seen I stepped into some kind of chamber, the walls covered in scars Makes left by human fingernails all the windows sealed with bars Silence swept the room, quite thunder sounding from the pipes My Lungs full of toxins because we had different religious types |
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12-02-05, 10:47 AM
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Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
^^its supposed to be with ur partners verse too..............
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12-02-05, 10:52 AM
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Black Poet
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IP: 7BC4 5A05
It's coming shodown !!,....
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12-03-05, 02:25 PM
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A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 7A9A 093F
Crazy Hades n Max McFly. beat souljah n critic due to no show.
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12-03-05, 02:28 PM
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A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 7A9A 093F
This thread is now Closed..
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12-03-05, 02:29 PM
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A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 7A9A 093F
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