Good piece guys. Let the votes commense. If anyone views this..

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*waits for 3 weeks to go by and have 2 votes*

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Yeah i feel what your saying there....


*Crosses fingers and pm's old participants vote*

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Fuck all of you. That is all.

Good drop for you too.

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Rev and DQ, wtf at your versenot making any sense to me. I was waiting for a twist, but you trailed off to a guy falling into a room and getting his pay check?
If im wrong please correct me.

You two dropped weak,seriously. Alot of lines began with I or small words, you two should know by now,start lines with verbs or adverbs and it creates alot more imagery.
Your vocab is weak, I feel you two just threw this together for the sake of dropping.
Hope i dont offend you fam. Just speaking what i thought while reading it.
but damn, this is no were near your usual level.

vote - suspicious and fathom this

That was the twist. It was spose to seem like he was going to jump off a cliff or something, but instead went in for a promotion. Metas.

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but it didnt link up well, you didnt hint it thru out,in one bar he went from jumping off the cliff to opening a door, you didnt play it out properly.
it hit to sudden with not enough imagery.

Thanks... Up this


1-0 in our favor.

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closed those two win remove this tounry congrats

C'mon ysdat.... and every1....



This cant be closed off of a 1 vote decision.... Dont even feel like a good win.... lets see if I can get some ex-participants to vote

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- Chryme Syndicate -

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Ya, at least 2 more votes saying we lost would be nice.

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^ lol.. not like that.. we could use a good break down....


We know hades wont vote and most of the others.. Hades wont because he feels he got cheated..... lil' bastard.....

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Omfg, vote dammit!