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Old 05-14-09, 09:42 AM   #1
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MurDaH187 vs YouAndWhatArmy

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16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting
No Gayness

3-0 = Technical Knockout

^that's coz I don't want to wait 20 years for it to go the distance, ya dig..

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Old 05-14-09, 09:43 AM   #2
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Old 05-14-09, 10:08 AM   #3
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lmao @ murdah, so ghetto faboulous

you’ve lost this, no matter how you attacking me right
call this a hostile takeover, like how you get laid on a saturday night
I’m raising funds with this beating, my fists bringing lucrative shares
beating you is such a cake walk.. next week i'm thinking I'll try musical chairs
your game is weak son, you’re just a chicks last option it seems
see, most dudes have a wingman.. murdah struggles with a whole soccer team
seriously though.. you do leave dudes shaken n’ torn
ya known for breaking up people..
..just ask ya parents about the day ya was born
n’ when it comes to a workout, this bum is never training till dark
instead of lifting weights on the bench, he just sprawled across one in the park
so I’ll wreck this lame, plus ya fat bitch can catch a fist fast
but when she moves she’s breathtaking, n’ beggin for an oxygen mask
now mom’s is working the corners, a hooker for the turn of the century
had so many foreigners inside her, her vag needs a SWAT team for tactical entry
I’m a sex god.. I go through pregnancy scares weekly at best
but I’m used to false positives..
..shit, I used to be sure you were decent at text


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Old 05-16-09, 12:22 AM   #4
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Old 05-17-09, 05:41 PM   #5
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No respect, u'll get beat dead, split with your teeth sledged
slid hes visa in the road but still come up with no street cred

listen you wack fry, work harder and pick up the slack guy
cuz your punches suck ass worst then a leech on your backside

YouAndWhatArmy?? thinking he roll deep but its Souly Him
This dude couldnt spit a slick verse with a mouth full of petroleum

this dual is not alarming, am exspected to lose to this prince charming
whos none name-brand alias come and go,
so of course they voted for you with ya What-Army

i'll piss throu all ya shit, look ya punches are poor with the hits
only time he'll be unique if you had a Disorder with scripts

U'r gonna Need All(needle) in this like a Smack head groupie, I'll Crack Heads Move ME, NAH!
the one who cant dance you finding it the 'Hardest to hide' cuz your the 'Calmest of Tides' in the Ways(waves) ya Lacking The Moves See(sea)

AM a 'Take you to School' cuz I'm Clever with Text Damn!
I'm Speakin_Prose_Through_Ya and We've "Senior"Flows,
"Junior": you're gettin "Soft-More" and "Never That "FRESH-MAN"

thinking hes rich with respect, but its a joke hes street cash debt, its funny
so for vote's he'll be doing more 'Head Jerking' then a text crash Dummy


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Old 05-17-09, 08:04 PM   #6
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^ lmao, that's the longest 16 lines i've ever seen
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Old 05-18-09, 10:43 PM   #7
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Nick why not vote plez....................................
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Old 05-21-09, 06:32 AM   #8
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Voted For: MurDaH187

just realized i cant see the names so how can i vote.lol

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Old 05-21-09, 02:43 PM   #9
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this is the most even matched battle ive seen in a while but this line is what won him the battle......

your game is weak son, you’re just a chicks last option it seems
see, most dudes have a wingman.. murdah struggles with a whole soccer team
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Old 05-21-09, 02:53 PM   #10
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okay this was a pretty good battle, the only thing is that it was kinda a manufactured battle. the punches weren't really that personalized. There weren't really any line that stuck out to mean in this battle that won it for each of you, but overall YAWA came stronger.

Murdah, you need to stop forcing things into your text. you sacrifice flow and making you lines make sense trying to put punches together.

'Calmest of Tides' in the Ways(waves) ya Lacking The Moves See(sea)
how are you going to say ways is the same as waves?
whos none name-brand alias come and go,
so of course they voted for you with ya What-Army
this might be a typo. didn't make much sense.

overall it felt manufactured. the first 6 lines were alright.

YAWA's verse had more solid punches. meaning it made sense and flowed to together well. They weren't that strong, but his verse was much clearer and what he was trying to say and the delivery was on point. some of his better lines were.

I’m a sex god.. I go through pregnancy scares weekly at best
but I’m used to false positives..
..shit, I used to be sure you were decent at text
seriously though.. you do leave dudes shaken n’ torn
ya known for breaking up people..
..just ask ya parents about the day ya was born

other than that they were all good lines that he had.

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Old 05-21-09, 03:00 PM   #11
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Alias...
Youandwhatarmy....
None name brand alias...
They'll vote for you, and, ur, what, army, of alias....

Eeehhh..... I guess....
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Old 05-27-09, 11:01 AM   #12
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Is this fletch on different account??
Anywayz army won this eazy.Totally one sided battle.
Murdah still elevateing and getting better i see but just not the level of army-different league.
Murdah you still putting those filler lines in- it ruins it.
Army had punch after punch with some funny ones in there.
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Old 05-27-09, 02:38 PM   #13
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next time you battle YAWA, try to not change the subject in between the 2 rhyming lines.....it makes it seem like you was just sayin things so they could rhyme with you punches......but it was still the better verse
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Old 05-27-09, 05:30 PM   #14
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