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02-19-07, 09:22 AM
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Mad Dog - Nothin' Remix!!!
IP: EF0E 6E3E
Nothin'
^ Track link direct... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3144681 & http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3144683 & http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3144684
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02-19-07, 09:33 AM
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The Most Feared Gang!
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Listenin'..
The beat is hot...NORE killed this...let's see what you do.. hmm you put his hook......yawnss........... cmonnnnnnnnnnnnnn waiting for ure ass... You got a good delivery, accent is putting off, lyrics aren't rlly saying shit...flow is aight, falling off a few times..delivery is gr8 thruought tho....... multis are nice........ you not as bad as most UK accents so word... not bad not amazing it's ok.. what's goodddddddddd : delivery, n flow is decent, emotion whats baddd: flow sumtime fall off, lyrically meh...didnt have much switch ups and accent but not yo prolem.. do yo thing man..1
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02-19-07, 10:33 AM
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Word....this was my favorite track for a while man....lol
But yeah, I see you kept the hook....not a bad idea cause NORE killed this shit. Your flow is pretty good on this beat man. You could use a little better breath control on this but not bad overall man. You should pan your dubs to the left of the right too....it helps separate them from your main lyrics a bit. This tracks pretty good though man. You could have lowered your vocals a bit too....I just noticed that. But yeah man....this is probably one of the best I've heard from you in my opinion. Probably cause I'm biased with the beat....lol Good shit man 
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02-19-07, 12:55 PM
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cheers breddas
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02-19-07, 02:50 PM
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yeerr liked this man...qualitys not amazin', but i liked your flow and you had a nice grimey delivery..lyrically it was cool aswell...keepin' the hook wasn't such a bad decision either, 'cause i did like the original hook from nore...i think ya could do abit more mixing wise like enygma said, but yeerr you've got the flow and everythin' pretty much locked down..keep droppin man
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02-19-07, 07:45 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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I hate famous beats being used for tracks...unless u jus toyin with schemes
other wise...beat is good..obviously vocals sound mixed well good delivery here...likin the sound of it jus not feelin the beat choice enjoyable tho 1 |
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02-20-07, 06:56 AM
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cheers for the feed guys keep 'em comin i'll RTF no doubt
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02-20-07, 06:57 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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OH man u took me back wit this one....its so played its ridiculous but an7yways....u opened strong, liking your energy....mixing could be crisper but its all good....lyrics is eh but u on sum fun shit here so I wont hold it gainst...u had a basic but fitting flow...coulda used a switch here an there...not feeling the fluctations in ya voice at beginning of ya lines when it goes up like 3 octaves sounds wrong to the ears but other than that shit is good man nice energy an vibe, keep it up son u def elevating.
Return the favor: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240116
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02-21-07, 01:24 PM
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appeciate that man ye i just went on some fun/sarcasm bragging bars just tweaking up ya know...but glad you liked...i'll definitely RTF tonight when i get home...and everyone else who dropped feed here appreciate it
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02-28-07, 04:54 AM
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cheers man uppin to the top...if i missed out on any RTF's e-slap me and let me know
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