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01-25-04, 05:52 PM | #1 | |||||||
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The Working Ranks
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Its Civilization’s foundation, what’s holding the nation stationed
I mean the ‘laymen’, in relation to the ones who’s taking The real men making the unions, doing the debating and creating! ‘The Little people’ relating, and equating to 9/10th’s of society Undeniably we’re reigning.. Who’s keeping down the inflation? By Remaining in the same ring, underpaid with 40 hours in Portrayed as.. “Thee who complains” if your questioning We’re worth less to them, second best to the rest living So I contest to un-repress the mass that’s repressed within The stigma preventing the working class getting an opinion in Getting our political win, recognition that we’re above a sin Not just un-willin, without motivation to bring, but aspire for more It’s the law…A weeks work, ¼ out the door, to the royal store The royal mint, lining their floor, which the minimum can’t afford I call it fraud, not much of a reward for industrial revolutions The contributions like mechanical solutions they “sort’a bought” “Sort’a use” it should be taught and enforced and not abused Don’t be confused, the working class are the cement that set the rules To essential to be used… without us, the fucking fools would lose Left confused at what to choose, just a lot’a suites with dusty tools Last edited by Dev : 01-25-04 at 05:55 PM. |
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01-25-04, 06:56 PM | #2 | |||||||
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freepost.......lol....some one reply
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01-25-04, 07:11 PM | #3 | ||||||
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not bad, some of the mesages were a little cliche'ish. overall it was pretyt good. you had some good thoughts and nice messages. the overall writer's voice and wirting was what shined the most
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01-26-04, 03:50 AM | #4 | |||||||
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thnx... uppin
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01-26-04, 07:03 AM | #5 | ||||||
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aiiight stuff....Fuck The Bourgoise...lol....gud stuff bruv...N reppihn UK
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01-26-04, 07:23 AM | #6 | |||||||
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reppin straight... hope ya aint gonna let the UK down,,,,,
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01-26-04, 08:51 AM | #7 | |||||||
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Yes, blasé it was; but the eire about the piece and yourself seems a bit charismatic, which is a good thing. A UK-propaganda piece, this reminded me of something Messiah would write; he, being my favorite of the Internet artists, would be something worth learning from, man. It had a unique flow, adequate vocabulary & no major word choice problems - just a few here and there. Get up a bit of a more complex array of writtens, & I see yourself earning a spot in the ranks. . Good Luck
Quality P.S. I'm the owner of a certain topical league that could use some new talent - AIM: RalphsBagels, if you are at all interested.
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01-26-04, 09:10 AM | #8 | ||||
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another dope piece by Dev..I really enjoyed this more than others..I think this really was one of your better produtcs..your vocab was fantastic(it is always),and your flow is one of a kind..and yes..I'm the new king of free post~~~
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01-26-04, 10:24 AM | #9 | |||||||
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thnx....lmao...joined in december, a month later nearly 1000 posts... FUCK... have ya keys still the letters written on them....
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