twelve lines, & good luck.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232552
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im bored so dropin early

i'll chop N' srew ya feat i'll just turn up the heat
cuz bottom line is
______Nbra________your signiture of defeat
dude im not gay so thiers no way ur gonna Hug me
cuz poeple always 'pic on you'<-----and they always turn out ugly
im never happy beat ya ass dude i'll do it with a frown
cuz you have Tons of heart.....but still cant hold it down
man its a hot day step up and you'll die OK!!!!
cuz the only time you dish somthing out...cuz you forgot to pay
fuck up this bitch cuz amount of lines i have left are just a few
cuz how you gonna make it to the 'final four'
....................when my first 6 lines destroyed you
come on lazy stop acting gay this isent a lounge
cuz you always putin up fights but the wind knocks them all down




final four of the playoffs you should get it

thiers ur 12 dawg

questioned the need to show up today. dont u see the look on his face?..
no reason studying for a test, when the answer keys written across his face.
a boss in the clutch. get outta dodge, or i'll drop ya man..
be a good sport about it, or just another victim left a saab sedan.
son best rock a helmet, before some real niggas'll have his brim grin..
when he catches enough hooks, to have u think vicelords jumped him in.
you can't rock me. your lips only thing that got me scared ya fiend..
had to leave a crack in your dome, that'd bring tyrone biggums to the scene.
catch u on the field, or near my plate. best've dugout ur grave u lame..
way i left u slumped over on ya seat, it'd have yankee fans beg a-rod to stay.
nothing special about you. average, inbetween, yeah.. dude's par..
you've had some elevation, but nobody gives a flying fuck who you are.

someone is gonna have to vote yo

im never happy beat ya ass dude i'll do it with a frown
cuz you have Tons of heart.....but still cant hold it down
fuck up this bitch cuz amount of lines i have left are just a few
cuz how you gonna make it to the 'final four'
....................when my first 6 lines destroyed you

Vs.

nothing special about you. average, inbetween, yeah.. dude's par..
you've had some elevation, but nobody gives a flying fuck who you are.

This was an ok battle. Test you have a wording problem man, I mean you used 'cuz' twice in one of your lines<<<<that sucks. The bars I quoted were good though, the last one sounds bit because this is a permanent league and there are no play-offs. Nbro (how the fuck do u pronounce that shit) some of your lines were okish but nothing good enough to quote apart from the last bar. Yeh, just keep improvin n shit...

Vote - Test

Test...

dude im not gay so thiers no way ur gonna Hug me
cuz poeple always 'pic on you'<-----and they always turn out ugly
im never happy beat ya ass dude i'll do it with a frown
cuz you have Tons of heart.....but still cant hold it down

-vs-

Nbro...

you can't rock me. your lips only thing that got me scared ya fiend..
had to leave a crack in your dome, that'd bring tyrone biggums to the scene.

V/ Test

Overall he had a stronger hittin verse with wording that made it a better read. Nbro...seemed like he tried to hard but his punches didn't have that snap on em like his opponent. Just got out Punched.

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Ehh, pretty weak battle. I got Test taking this by a pube... The only line i felt from Nbro was the Tyrone Biggums one...but i think i've seen a flip like that before. I sensed the confidence in the verse, but a lot of the lines were just too simple. Test had some weak ones too, but he had a couple more punches that hit harder than anything in Nbro's verse.

vote - Test

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v/ Test

wasnt feelin this battle at all.
i thought Nbro had the best line of the battle with the crack/biggums line, but like Shake said, ive seen it used before. everything else wasnt appealing to me.
Test was aoght. didnt have many heavy hitters but was a bit more consistent.