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One Man Band | 5 | 71.43% | |
Natural killa | 2 | 28.57% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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09-23-05, 06:28 PM | #1 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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Natural killa vs One Man Band
IP: 99DE 8D89
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12-16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No d/r No HATE This a multi battle...so vote based on multis only.Not on punches or w/e. Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 09-26-05 at 06:28 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Win by forfeit |
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09-23-05, 06:31 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: C98F 1FA2
One Man Band has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-05 06:31 PM.
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09-23-05, 06:36 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 99DE 8D89
Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-05 06:36 PM.
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09-26-05, 04:54 AM | #4 | |||||
I have a lot to learn...
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IP: C98F 1FA2
battling you is empty, like playin with text be
the pain is intense see.. my brain is entrenched deep, into thoughts of makin moves to get the fuck outta this life the sounds that I write got emotion blurrin my sight all this anger n' pain got me hurtin the mic i ain't gonna let 'em fall til all a my dreams is true put the kid over some hot beats n' poof... you got magical music that'll heat the booth the flow is evidence, the rhyme schemes is proof the content is ill, the talk is real... competition I kill watch ya spot, i'm in a position to fill any position or skill so called sick emcees got nothin on my medicinal flows throwin up fingers n' bows.. god bless the mic n' tickle ya nose Leavin this kid rocked, when I take advantage of rules its a multi battle, punches dont have to be attackin at you I could just talk like a babblin fool, in one line ill have as much yappin as you would normally have in a few, and practically use as much of this battle threads room as I want, slappin a broom, magical tomb, laughing at shrooms, immaculate dude, passin the duece, blah blah faggot thats blue, cracking a shoe into a pile of traffic and goo until a bitch with a towel rack attached to her boobs passes and screws a million zoos, koo koo kachu. ^line 16 was actually one line, im just real noob so its a little bit stretched.
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09-26-05, 03:14 PM | #5 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 92C8 98DE
murdering with keystyles 'n freestyles..while never unheard,the cypher tactic
like infants chewin on candy,poison concealed..so obsured 'n hyper active cant's say u got riders 'n lactic...cuz u get no milking from prostitudes just erections,no bust..and direction of dust's where u tilting 'n lost-in-flutes a pussy standing still with the Boston roots...only retreating from beef can't call this a battle unless reffering to when he's beating his meat kick him 'n sink in his front teeth...& make 'em swallow their plaque ur turn,u behind shook...i'll burn ya rhyme book..ur raps hollow 'n whack all's you do is follow the pack....shit...a kissin ass 'n dickridin galore beatin urself 'n seekin some help cuz ur moms up in a cast,a bitch hidin in court fighting's the thought...but ur pissing ur pants from the nightmare lunchin in the can and u never punching a man..cuz tampons might tear can's run from here...the love taps considered ur great manuever grab hold of ya breast 'n demote-it..cuz i'm homophobic so i'd never hate to bruise-ya & to win?nobody'd choose-ya....for real...ur shit's cold 'n hated,a ban-for-sure they all came to bet but u staying so wet..ur just an overrated amatuer |
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09-26-05, 05:57 PM | #6 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 18D2 03D8
c'mon.......vote you lazy bitches.................
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09-27-05, 07:13 AM | #7 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 5564 AC19
aah.......uppin this shit........................
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09-27-05, 02:36 PM | #8 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: ABB1 0A83
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09-27-05, 08:19 PM | #9 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: ABB1 0A83
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09-28-05, 01:04 PM | #10 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: D798 64F5
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09-28-05, 04:11 PM | #11 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 8940 A7DF
uppin.............................................
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09-28-05, 07:00 PM | #12 | |||||
I have a lot to learn...
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IP: C98F 1FA2
lmao... not a single vote -_- .
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09-28-05, 09:58 PM | #13 | |||||||
Artist, that simple
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IP: 66CB 6C02
Voted For: Natural killa
Pretty good battle.... battling you is empty, like playin with text be the pain is intense see.. my brain is entrenched deep, 8/10 - solid opener into thoughts of makin moves to get the fuck outta this life the sounds that I write got emotion blurrin my sight 6/10 - very lacking in sense making. The sounds that i write got emotion blurrin my sight? Doesn't have a connection between your music and how it got your emotion blurring your sight all this anger n' pain got me hurtin the mic i ain't gonna let 'em fall til all a my dreams is true put the kid over some hot beats n' poof... you got magical music that'll heat the booth 8/10 good line, like the connection between magic and the usage of "heat" the flow is evidence, the rhyme schemes is proof the content is ill, the talk is real... competition I kill watch ya spot, i'm in a position to fill any position or skill 7/10 - a lot of self glorification....but would have been better if you fix the second line so called sick emcees got nothin on my medicinal flows throwin up fingers n' bows.. god bless the mic n' tickle ya nose 7/10 - another average bar. The first line was real simple. I kinda expected you to say medicine when you spoke of sick mcs Leavin this kid rocked, when I take advantage of rules its a multi battle, punches dont have to be attackin at you 7/10 - average bar again. Seems that you tried to sneak a punch in, lol I could just talk like a babblin fool, in one line ill have as much yappin as you would normally have in a few, and practically use as much of this battle threads room as I want, slappin a broom, magical tomb, laughing at shrooms, immaculate dude, passin the duece, blah blah faggot thats blue, cracking a shoe into a pile of traffic and goo until a bitch with a towel rack attached to her boobs passes and screws a million zoos, koo koo kachu. Ending - 7/10 - Seems that you were trying to find more words to rhyme than concentrating on using metas to get your point across murdering with keystyles 'n freestyles..while never unheard,the cypher tactic like infants chewin on candy,poison concealed..so obsured 'n hyper active 9/10 - Very good multi use.........Great opener cant's say u got riders 'n lactic...cuz u get no milking from prostitudes just erections,no bust..and direction of dust's where u tilting 'n lost-in-flutes 8/10 - nothing I can really say wrong about this.... a pussy standing still with the Boston roots...only retreating from beef can't call this a battle unless reffering to when he's beating his meat 7/10 - Umm.....punches maybe....lol. decent line. kick him 'n sink in his front teeth...& make 'em swallow their plaque ur turn,u behind shook...i'll burn ya rhyme book..ur raps hollow 'n whack 7/10 - Average line. You started off great, but i dont like the ending. Should have connected more to "burning" then whack, feel me.. all's you do is follow the pack....shit...a kissin ass 'n dickridin galore beatin urself 'n seekin some help cuz ur moms up in a cast,a bitch hidin in court 7/10 - Personal......another average line. First line wasnt effective. fighting's the thought...but ur pissing ur pants from the nightmare lunchin in the can and u never punching a man..cuz tampons might tear 8/10 - Good connection to the previous line. Good Multi... can's run from here...the love taps considered ur great manuever grab hold of ya breast 'n demote-it..cuz i'm homophobic so i'd never hate to bruise-ya & to win?nobody'd choose-ya....for real...ur shit's cold 'n hated,a ban-for-sure they all came to bet but u staying so wet..ur just an overrated amatuer 6/10 - First bar was your worst out of the rest. Total OMB - 50 NK - 54 I vote NK, good battle guys. OMB, needed more connection and more usage of metas. NK, your problem is the total opposite. It seemed that you had more punches than metas, but was able to rebound by using them in the punches.
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09-28-05, 09:59 PM | #14 | |||||||
Artist, that simple
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IP: 66CB 6C02
wow, i'm surprised that i'm the first to vote............
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09-28-05, 11:26 PM | #15 | ||||||
I have a lot to learn...
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IP: C98F 1FA2
hmm I cant be bothered going through that vote and pointing out everything bad about it...
But it looks like you forgot to abide by natural killa's rules in your vote. Quote:
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