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Old 06-24-06, 07:10 PM   #1
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Old 06-24-06, 07:18 PM   #2
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Playing... beats cool..... quality is a bit better from what I think I last heard of yours. Flows punchy, cant really make out your lyrics to well, but from what i can hear i think the entire track is punchlines.
Try some EQ"ing bro, lower your mids a bit, should help the vocals blend a bit better. Dubs and adlibs are ok, but again, i cant realyl make out what your saying.
not saying thats a bad thing,just the accent bro.

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Old 06-24-06, 07:21 PM   #3
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ok, cheers mate.
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Old 06-25-06, 09:05 AM   #4
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iite listenin...

love this beat... better rip...

emotion is sick man... quality aint that good can hear somwe mad shit in the background... get used to equin ya vocals you'll get a more proffesional sound.... flow is pretty sick ..... lyrics are kwwl.... not long but its pretty sick imo... you've elevated madly since ya last track... keep it up man u need ne tips on mixin n shit ask me on msn init n al tell ya

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Old 06-25-06, 09:32 AM   #5
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cheers lad.

Im gonna look up on EQ'in.
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Old 06-26-06, 06:30 PM   #6
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are u a brit????...well,,quality is ugh...i can barely understand what u saying...this is a random thing?...wel nice flow on it...beat was kinna raw u know...nice yeah


ps do something a lil bit longer no matta the randomness...and hit my siggy 'prince track' plz...


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Old 06-26-06, 08:09 PM   #7
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Yeah im english,and il hit it up tomoz, cheers.
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Old 07-01-06, 04:12 PM   #8
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Old 07-02-06, 12:16 PM   #9
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Old 07-02-06, 12:19 PM   #10
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ehh @ beat.....u come in REAL hype..maybe shoulda worked into the hype...the overdubs here fuck u all up.....libs and bad..but how u overdubbed it all kinda threw it off, cuz they were off in some spots, lyrics was ok from what i herd....idk about the flow, was kinda choppy here...try to smooth it out some...best thing here was emotion....

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Old 07-02-06, 01:03 PM   #11
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seen.

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ehhh....didnt really like it. beat was pretty nice, but i dunno if its ur vocals/mic/EQing...but i wasnt feeling it. try re-recording it, and EQ it a lil so we can understand the vocals betta...then it will prob b hot. but without being able to hear the lyrics i cant comment too much.

up the quality, and hit me back.
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woowzers..spittin in light speed.....hahhaa...maybe its the accent iono...

comin in you come nice and hyped across a nice beat....
little short one...cool cool....
only thing here is i can't really understand ya that much....but then again..it could be the accent again.....iono....but its a dope track regardless......keep it comin man
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Old 07-19-06, 02:50 PM   #14
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Old 07-26-06, 11:38 AM   #15
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whoa at the quality improvement...

short track again...beats one of ya better ones...
still not really feelin it though lol sorry man too basic for my liking...flows still choppy and delivery needs work but now ya quality's improved i got a better understanding of ya verse...so improvements there man...jus keep workin at it...try and work on ya writing technique as well...lose that text style of chatting...

but ye...RTF in my sig...(I'm Talking To You)
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