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Old 07-31-06, 07:47 PM   #1
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3 New Free Beats!!!

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fuck off, i quit with beats, been a long time i didnt make something good so fuck off

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Old 07-31-06, 09:42 PM   #2
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Im just gonna be honest man, not heard anything yet, but take my criticism and use it! n dont question my experience, since I have made beats in the past - not for long, but I have....

SlowMotion - honestly, you might call it SlowMotion...but it was so bad, I wish it went faster - nothings working, before anything you need a good melody/tune and this doesnt have it...those strings are as annoying as fuck too, and so is that pluck thing - I dont know what to suggest, since I dont see any potential in it

Take This - now this beat, actually has some potential - again, I hate your use of sounds and instruments....try experimenting with different sounds, ones that actually sound good and work together and this might sound decent - also, drums are pretty good but I dont like that hi-hat in there...seriously, use some better sounds and work on this

Dead Inside - Probably your best beat of the three, it sounds a lot more fuller and complete than the other two at least - though, you really need to change those drums man! they spoil this song, try something more softer as well...they just irritate you throughout the song....yeh, so change those annoying drums and youll have a decent beat here!!!

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Old 08-01-06, 01:18 AM   #3
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Slowmotion...dont like at all. i dont kno how u were tryin to take the beat, but no matter how it was...i wasnt feeling it.

Take this...that metal clank sound is annoying after a while. try either lowering the volume, or lowering the volume and panning slightly one way or the other.

Deep Inside...not bad...i like how everything flows togetha...


rework Take this...and get back at me. id love to use it


if u get a minute...check my new beats, www.soundclick.com/7curse
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