ryt leme give ya my two pence...

mixing is tight as fuck so good that ur verse as mixed aswell as professional hooks. keep it up man. plus u gotta gimme some mixing tips!! haha

anyway flow is on point. there was quite a few lyrics that u need to understand to appreiciate. but wen u do its hot.

i've prolly sed this b4 but ur one fo the most versitile emcees dat i have heard. u can do songs on a grimy tip, then make some catchy shit for a club banger, den u can slow it down for some deep lyrically shit. its all good man. like i sed b4 they only way u can improve is to jus keep putting out song after song. u shud try and keep a few more on ur soundclick aswell so peeps can see how u have improved to.

keep it up man

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