Voted For: Kesse

thinks he's droppin hard, but really he exchanged feathers for his brain
i literally eat pigs like you, just re-arrange the letters of your name
GOOD PERSONAL, HAHAHA, GOT EM
like drunken down husbands on their wives, i'll attack this whore
crack ya core as i smack ya more, paintin up an 'L' as your blood splats the floor
NICE FLOW HERE, MULTIS
if you were to measure your rhymes, they wouldn't even tip the guage
cause when it comes to skill......your at the same level as your age
EHH, COULDVE BEEN BETTER
now i'd like to explain your sig to all of RV, so dont be hating
thugged out = whack....cause you man have no chance of elevating
PRETTY NICE CLOSER
OVERALL SIMPLE, TO THE POINT, NICE VERSE
NO NEED FOR THE EXPLANATION
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Bitch ur "Flows straight out the toilet" like "Overflowin shitters"
And my flow? its like a "Chargers QB" cuz son i "Fill-up Rivers" (Philip Rivers)
GOOD LINE,BUT PUNCH WAS MOSTLY SELF GLORIFY
Cant rap like spitter, Kesse like "Puttin dicks in whores" "Loose-in Often" (Losin often)
And Ill "Stun" u w/ "3 16"s, ull be out "Stone Cold" like "Steve Austin"
STRECHED, I SEE WAT YOU TRYING TO DO, NEEDS A LIL RE WORDING
So keep talkin, ill have ya whole team missin u, while their bumpin that old "Kels" (R kelly)
Like "I wish Kesse didnt battle AMH, and I wish he didnt put his career on the shelf"
DECENT, NOT BAD, NEEDS A LIL MORE
Put ya "Hands on my belt", cuz thats the "Closest ull ever come to my unit" (unit/team,dick)
And "My positive lines is mathematical" so of course "Non-Scientifics knew it" (his crew)
OK THIS WHOLE VERSE HAD THE POTENTIAL TO BE KILLER BUT SOME THINGS RUINED IT, 1. TOO STRETCHED AND STRUCTURE WAS CRAZY OFF, 2. NO NEED FOR EXPLAINATION WITH IN THE VERSE. 3. RE WORD IT AND YOU HOT.
FOR NOW I GOTTA VOTE KEESE

OH YEAH, RETURN THE FAVOR, NO HATE
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Voted For: A_M_H

AMH:
OK you had wordplay..but you rhymed with
only one sound. Which ruined the rhyming,but you
used all personals which you seem to be consistent with.
nice structure,but I don't give two fucks about that.

Kesse
You had no wordplay really.
Just insults, but you had meta's I'll give you that.
Fix your rhyme scheme and be more complex.
Add some personals in too.

Vote/AMH

Voted For: A_M_H

Kesse
ight ok your stucture was very off the flow was good but damn theres nothing creative about your verse just real simple and basic i wasent feeling the vibe you tryed to give i dont even think you tryed to give one i jsut think you didnt have the punches nor creativty to win, no hate

AMH
ight nothing ive never seen before ive seen alot ebtter from you but i can see your rusty with text the punches were alright nice personals and the stucture was very great the flow was perfect the vocab was ight but the punches were what got you this a win actually everything this was one sided battles peace

opener: amh
closer: amh
punches: amh
stucture: kesse
flow: amh
creativty: amh
personals: amh

Vote: A_M_H

Voted For: A_M_H

A_M_H - Allright, this was a good verse. Nice solid structure that flowed great. The punches were solid, hit hard and were funny as shit. Good personals too. You came pretty good in this battle. My favourtie line was...

^ Yep, good shit. Nice verse...7.5/10

kesse - Good verse as well. You also had a solid structure with good flow. The punches were there and connected allright. Not as hard as Skriptz though. You didn't have as many personals as him either. Don't get me wrong your verse was good just really played. Seen the closer used by Socrates before...and the punches thing has been used countless amounts of times. Your verse...6/10

Vote: AMH

Voted For: A_M_H

A'ight in all honesty this was a close battle...both came dope wit some nice punches and personals.

Kesse...you need to work on flow and structure. Alot of your punches are elementary, your vocabulary is weak, and you need somethin a bit more creative. I liked how you included his avater, that was pretty good, but just keep workin at it, and you will be dope.

AMH...not the best I have seen from you, but still dope. Flow was on point and structure was off a lil, and you came wit some witty punches and personals. Close battle...but AMH takes it.