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Old , 02:15 PM   #2
don cardyac
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don cardyac vs young sin

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don cardyac
 
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i said 12 lines but somehow it did that well the rule is 12 max.

like football playoffs, you can't bare(bear) me so i'll turn this sinner into a saint/
let bullets CHECK the back of his head and BOUNCE his memory BANKS/
i wouldn't FEEL what'chu was spittin' if you rapped it in BRAIL/
sinnin' but yours couldn't TOUCH BARS this hot if they was locked up in HELL's JAIL/
so i won't call 'em HOT BARS i'll make your SET DIP so i call 'em HELL(hot) RAILS(rell/bars)/
rip out'cha HEART and put it underground in a box if you tell tales(telltaleheartstory)/
your back'll turn yellow(scared) over green(money) like stale kale/
thats why you broker than the traders who tell sales(stockbrokers)/
leave young sin, duckin', if he bluffin' what he's buckin'/
cuz its nufin' to cut his eyes sockets out like a pumpkin' & stuff 'em/
prolly a drag queen, he more mixed up(confused) when he's DRESSIN" than STUFFIN'/
youngin', flows a low blow, so you dont need titties to B(e) cuppin'/

its nufin'.
 
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Young Sin
 
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This 'dude-is-weak'.. And yeah you "push keys" but it aint cuz u connected, its cause you a fuckin 'computer-geek'
u dont know the 'rules-to-beef'.. get stripped and left lookin like a "boxer".. nothing but 'boots-and-briefs'
Wak rappers.. Im 'training-yall-for-a-hobby'.. Bout to have you laid 'sprained-an-sprawled-in-the-lobby'
'Aim-an-spark-wit-da-shotty'.. Leavin' Don wit so much holes that dudes can play 'games-of-golf-on-ya-body'
Look at this lames record and you'll 'neva-see-winz'.. While I treat wak rappers like a bowlin game... knock down 'ev-ery-pin'
Sprayin every body part down from ya 'head-to-ya-limbs'.. And this battle is something like "Sunday School".. cause there, u could 'never-see-SiN'
ill put duke in his place, watch this 'fag-git-sliced' have him in the hospitol, body covered in 'bags-of-ice'
Catch you at the 'traffic-light' and have bullets go "In one ear and out the other" like 'bad-advice'
And yeah you a boss.. the 'boss-of-pussys'.. So dont be runnin ya mouth roun dudes that'll stick u.. make u run 'all-ya-goodies'
Listen Don I 'taught-you-rookie'.. So I wont hesitate to "break you apart for paper" just like a 'fortune-cookie'
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