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Old 09-13-05, 10:00 AM   #1
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Well...I Tried :/ My First BEAT!!!

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Old 09-13-05, 12:22 PM   #2
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For A First Beat This is really nice. Fact Its nice in general.

I really like those drums, and the stringe sound dope as fuck to me, the broken type sound works really well. That vocal sample is nice too.

But You could use more content in there, since it does sound a bit empty, maybe add some bass or stings, or somethin.

Good goin tho, I really like it for a first beat. Keep tryin.
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Old 09-13-05, 01:06 PM   #3
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why aint u let me peep this one when u hit me up last nite. lol. much better than the other one u sent me. only thing i see wrong , is repetiveness. switch up the drums some. not necessarily a bassline but a hit/stab or a sub every other bar. keep up da good work. FMR South
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Old 09-13-05, 02:06 PM   #4
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lol i thought this was what i sent you lastnight lol. but i realized this morning it wasnt but figured i might as well post it up.. thanks for the feedback distil and pers..Much appreciated and imma keep at it.
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Old 09-13-05, 07:54 PM   #5
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You Should Make The Link In Your Sig Clickable Though,RV Peoples Be Lazy.
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Old 09-13-05, 08:28 PM   #6
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sounds pretty weird lol, but yeah good for a first one, nice voice sample, but i prefer your second, u elevated like WOAH!!!! lol seriously, the second beat is dope seriously, the only things is that anoying beep beep lol, and that too dark string lol, overall good job for both of them,

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