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Old 08-02-05, 12:41 PM   #1
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ayall these 2 dudes on this other rapsite are battlin but they keep arguing bout who won so cood yalll plz tell me who won so i can tell there bitch asses lol, but yea telle me wut verse is better

1st verse-

Make u regret thinkin ur tough 2 scare/
These bullets wont be "Missing You", but ull still "Puff" 4 air/*

Commin wit dat weak shit, u'll be loosing ya wig/
Da only 1 "head banging" 2 ya rhymes is da "dude in ya sig"/

Aint nothin poppin off, u bluffin da spark/
You should team up "Bow Wow" since you do nothin but "bark"/

Murderin dis, it aint right but fuck being fair/
Truth will leave a "9" 2 ya front n back like ur "Steve McNair"/

U aint a hustla bitch, I got bricks/
Da kids stays commin wit more "straps" than "high top kicks"/

Yall dont hold Truth, cant even hold ya own names/
Ill throw more "bullets in the dome" than Mike Vick at "home games"/

I aint even tryin, SG's wack? Fuck what u hear/
Ima just gonna cut my bars short at dis point, like ur fuckin career/

* Puff Daddy - Missing You

2nd verse-

ive Got Norton Anti-Virus So Why Are My Rhymes Still ‘iLL’ ?
u Could Fuck The ~Compton Member Of G-Unit~ u STILL Wudnt Be ‘In The Game’

My Verse is Like a Virgins Pussy u Cant ‘Touch iT’
n My Punchlinez Are As ‘Tight’ As a Tramps Budget

The "truthhurts"and YOU Couldn’t hold a title you just ~Blew the “G.O.A.T”~ /
And I know you cant ~swallow the 'truth'~ that’s why I ~heard you choke~/

Id ~masticate the screen~ just to ~maim you verse~/
While you ~write on your dick~ just to ~play with words~/

Your ill that's da 'truth'… so fight that infection.
First step is don’t ~write with your rectum~
You cant ~‘kick it’~ to rappers even though you ~“bend it like beckham”~/

You could set up your verse in the ~non-virgin section~ /
and da TRUTH is you'd still have no place to ~stick that erection~/

every one of my punches hit bitch im da ~"sargent"~
Your shit would be garbage, if you were ~just a bit larger~/

Maybe ~Starr* could~get you a hit in the ~new kid market~/
I calmly ~stick dick to your verse~ and you try to ~blow my composure~/
Just ~bare with me~, you could ~strip naked~ and still never know ~exposure~/

*maurice starr produced "new kids on the block"
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Old 08-03-05, 12:32 AM   #2
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i only read a lil bit but i guess the second..............didnt really pay attention tho so maybe itl still help , rofl
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Old 08-04-05, 09:22 AM   #3
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yeah i agree w/ morse it was ok but need dat intriguing & it didn't pull me in reading it keep working on it u'll reach ya potential
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Old 08-04-05, 11:12 AM   #4
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first one wins fo sho
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Old 08-04-05, 02:09 PM   #5
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Closed,Have a nice day
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