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Old 11-27-07, 03:39 PM   #1
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Taking Out The Trash...( Fuck Un-emplyment)

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Fuck Un-employedment ya only good for ryding each other dick how ya soppuse to get better when u cant addmit when a drop is WACK and needs IMPROVEMENT?? that daubs diss was WEAK and mad recycled... Germ Diss was mad trash and lame...im glad that shit got closed before i can reply but im about to take out the trash... LETS GO!!

There Be nothing left of these wack chumps after I get hectic.. un-employment newbish...
Watch us have them ‘dropped intern’ with flunked medical students...
At their reps pinnacle.. fakeness becomes clearly seen thru & obvious...
Turned into a pair of spectacles that could impress any Optometrist...
Ya’ll fall far from Glory.. cuz when put together your rhymes are boring...
Just putting on ‘a show about nothing’ that would satisfy a Seinfeld story...
daubs leave your muscles displaced.. weedy nerds left fussed and dismayed...
Showing RV a pair of petrified herbs.. much the same as fossil-displays...
these Un-employed lames know they can’t beat us.. whenever we punch on they'll never wins votes...
So when it comes down to the crunch.. it’ll always be my fist and they nose...
And his rusty partners styles gone retarded... these days Germ aint the illest...
he trying to Force Feed us punches.. but like anorexica he'll never fill up a complet meal kid..
When ransum start spiting out names ya bitches i'll lose..
bullets like medicane..a few shots i'll have this germ Remove..
ya crew career roots i'll never seed like curropted florist...
couldn’t bring the ‘leading-edge’ to this battle backed by U2’s guitarist...
So punches burn chunks thru his belly.. turning his lungs into jelly...
Your damaged as jabs fly ‘India Air-passage’ like round-trips thru New-Delhi...
Fed-up waiting? get untimely buried.. Germ drops show no dedication...
Cuz the only time Germ ‘calling the shots’ is when its time for his medication...
Now witness them writing our apology thread when this finishes...
After this..Un-employed'll ‘never recover again’ like closed down businesses...
We were born for Guinesses.. while they’re the sorts to just keep on posing...
So the only limelite they’ll be getting.. will be to aid their corpses decomposing...

300 J.G We Running This Rap Shit...
fuck un-employed ya niggas is trash vets a bounch of old heads who need to quit RAP....

We bring creativeness to open mic...
we original with our concept and drops while you lames like daubs only good to RECYCLE...

YA NOT FUCKING WITH US AT ALL....
EZ...
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Old 11-27-07, 05:14 PM   #2
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big words don't make you dope especially in a rhyme with no multies whatsoever

come harder or don't come at all

and i know some textcee aint tellin me to quit rap when i'd murder him lyrically
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Old 11-28-07, 09:22 AM   #3
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ran-sum...ur shit wouldnt be that whack ...man listen and take no dis-respect to this.

first off: Your flow is terrible, u have extended lines that need to be cut down...try matching syllables...could help enhance the flow...Punches...not great..tho not horrible either...just work on ur wording a bit more to recieve a different take on them.


this is abit of a downgrade from ur last diss. nohate.


oh...and u keep sayin that unemployment is whack? it has some of the best heads rv has ever seen in it...so thats an obvious false statement...i've switched names a lot...and been here since 04, and ur style is quite outdated bro..so its u that needs to fix shit up.......


no hate..just facts...keep progressin man.
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Old 11-28-07, 09:24 AM   #4
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ya crew career roots i'll never seed like curropted florist...
couldn’t bring the ‘leading-edge’ to this battle backed by U2’s guitarist...

^^forced rhyme.
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Old 12-05-07, 06:26 PM   #5
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bruv, i pitty u,

do u ACTUALLY GENUINLY think ur better than me. ur fuckin SHITE.

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Old 12-21-07, 11:32 AM   #6
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for sum1 who has alot of trap,u dont bring enough 2 the table.........
weak piece,not alot of flow,half ur raps includin this hardly ryhmes.5/10
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Old 01-11-08, 01:45 PM   #7
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your 0-1 and talking shit???

you wouldnt understand a punch if it hit you...
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Old 01-11-08, 05:21 PM   #8
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Closed. -.- no links forever
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