Hustler By nautre pushin posion by choice
Staks stacking high im quiet(pause) these dead pez's my voice
Money motivated dolla signs is happiness translated
into a tangiable form...the almighty dolla got my conciense sedated
unable to act like the norm... stash houses i've infultrated
got out and weathered the storm...bullets i've shot penatrated
vests,heads,made motha's morn...while my love for the money has escalated
while my love for wat is right has been torn...im evil a sadistic fuk and i hate-it
but to get this cash is the reason i was born...my secret to the grave i will take-it
see my stripes have been earned but not one of them worn...



3 min key bored lemme know!!!

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=245529
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=245425

very nice key, nice topic, real shit.. but i heard u was gay.. wassup wit that homie?
look, nice spit tho joe, i aint come atcha head, im just askin
u always spit a wee bit ok, but, if u gay u cant b no rapper dude.. thats just that

for a key i'd give it a 7/10 lol
try to stay on beat sum places u stretched yo shit
good shit tho, keep it up

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ha GAY you cant be takin everything sum1 says in a 'diss tha asshole above you' cypha to serious bro i get pussy like a rockstarr matta fact i love pussy...thanks for the feed tho..aand i fell yah all my drops on here are par cuz i pop n drop 3-10 mins is wat i spend on here sites dead..if it picks up ill take my time on sum drops...

i feel u mayne..
my writtens are wassup, i keystyle on here
i dont kno why the site b dead, and how we can get it poppin again
cuz i kno it used to b
im finna start invitin ppls joe

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whats wit the keystyles in open mic??????????????????????????

thats where they go you kukin retard god i hate idiots like you

Tu ur a bitch battle me!!!

oh ok this is why you called me out, keystyles as far as i know belong in the cyphers thats all i ment, i had just read a keystyle by 42keys before i read this one, thats why i said that, but yerr im just waiting for you to set the battle and we can do this

This is garbage.

No structure.
No time
no effort
no skill behind this peice.

TU's right, crap like this should be in cyphers.

Good to see a mods doing his job -_-

elevate!

no structure your a fukin moron bro...no time goes into a keyed drop either wow ur fukin dumb bro!!!thenks for the feed tho!!!!bitch

i mean what can i say good...

you tryed to flow this as best u can decent...
the punches wasnt there...
creativeness was lacking...
the multis was missing...

all around to sum this up....
you need to keep droping alot more cyphers before you come to open mic...
open mic is strickly pre-written stuff u've actully worked on to show off ya skill's so if this the best u can do then this is weak and should be kept in the cypher fourm which is what got soul is trying to say....

Go to the home page read what it says the open mic is for then slap yourself for saying the open mic is not for keystyles.... unless your beyond from rapflava(psst.) your a bitter!!!!

here's the link....
http://www.rapflava.com/forums/neve...der-136690.html

good stuff dude