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Old 04-21-06, 08:46 PM   #1
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Old 04-21-06, 08:49 PM   #2
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you gotta drop feed on 2 tracks and leave links... theres a link to something you can drop feed on...

if you dont post to links to tracks you've left feed on this thread will be closed...

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Old 04-21-06, 08:49 PM   #3
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Listenin'..money makers fo sho my nigga...quality is not good but i aint gon knock u fo that atall..beat is dirty south...youre flow is real robotic, you gotta add more emotion into it fam...so ure words fluctuate...really feel what ure sayin...i can tell u begginin cos all i can hear is u rereadin your lyrics...make sure next time u write lyrics to tha beat, if you are u dont want to be writin "x x x....xxxx..xx" it shud be more consistent like of "xxxxxxxxxxx"....but keep workin on it dawg...this is jus startin ull get better fam aight next joint i want u to work on:

- Work on fluctuatin ure voice, give more emotion

- Flow will be better if you write to tha beat....keep gettin up..n improvin..
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Old 04-21-06, 08:56 PM   #4
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Old 04-21-06, 11:04 PM   #5
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hmmmm the concept is old and really played... flow was generally off point... coulda been better as far as voacls quality goes... in a nut shell I just really wasn't feeling this track from the get go... but the beat was ok... No offense, just my opinion...

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